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Joined: Nov 9, 2007
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alashmori   
Nov 27, 2007
Speeches / Styles of Argumentation [5]

greeting!!!

i will start?

good expostulator has namy adjectives.

1- has good reason

2- good listener

3- quite and respict other people opinion.

Now can u help me to find more

I think that is good topic to chare our opinion about, is not it?

I hope u to be reacting with this topic. Give us ur attitude about the argument.

Thanks
alashmori   
Nov 27, 2007
Speeches / Styles of Argumentation [5]

Greetig!!

Actually I do not know what do u mean?

But my subject is talking about the good away to make people accept ur believe or idea by argument with them

Thanks
alashmori   
Nov 27, 2007
Essays / I Need Help in the "Literature" Type of Essay [6]

Greeting

Actually, what the teacher gave me is a picture and asked to write a literary essay one is creative and the other is personal. Although the teacher gives the idea but it makes me so confuse when I start writing.

The problem is that when the teacher gives the picture I do not know if I should mention the view for the picture or just imagine and write my opinion and creative story

Thanks
alashmori   
Nov 26, 2007
Speeches / Styles of Argumentation [5]

Greeting!!

Actually this topic I chose this topic becuase I think it is important to know about it specially in those days, right.

I hope overy one to be active with this topic.

Thanks...
alashmori   
Nov 26, 2007
Essays / I Need Help in the "Literature" Type of Essay [6]

Greeting!!

Literature is the type of essay for this month. In fact I do not have any idea how to writ it. What I know about this type of writing is can it be creative or personal.

Now I want your experience to tell me how can I writ this kind of essay. As you know I did not know how to recognize writing the two types of literature.

Thanks...
alashmori   
Nov 22, 2007
Essays / I need help to write a classification essay about shopper [6]

greeting!!

Actually, I do not know what to say I know that I used to be late to pass my essay but those days I had an exam so sorry for late.

By the way that is my passage between your hand I hope u interesting it and I know that my hand writing is so bad specially in the grammar so I hope you to correct them, also after you correct them I wish from you to explain for my why it correct like this.

Thanks any way
alashmori   
Nov 22, 2007
Essays / I need help to write a classification essay about shopper [6]

Greetings!!

This is my essay.

The Shopper

Do you like shopping? Everyone likes shopping but everyone has his own personality when he goes to shopping. Actually I like shopping. Every weekend I call my friend to go shopping but in fact the hate to go out with me because I do not buy any thing. Actually it is my habit whenever I go for shopping. Although, most of my friend don't buy any thing but I do not know why they like to call me miser man. There r three types of shopper such as intelligent shopper, impulsive shopper and windows shopper when it come to their habit.

The first type of shopper "intelligent shopper" is the best type of shopper. Actually, intelligent shopper used to make plane when they decided to go fro shopping. He goes directly to buy his needs and come back directly; he does not lose so long time in the shop. In fact, intelligent shopper saves his money and his time. He does not buy something that he does not need it also he does not spend most of time in the shop. In the other hand, sometimes this kind of shopper thinks about money more than their desire. For example, intelligent shopper sometimes likes to buy something it maybe force him in the shopping buy he will not buy it because he does not make plane for it and be scarily about the money. Therefore intelligent shopper is an anxious person and all his thought about the money.

The second type of shopper is the impulsive shopper. Actually this type of shopper is careless about money and he buys whatever he wants. Although, he make plane before he go shopping, he buys anything admire him. Actually an impulsive shopper enjoys himself by buying every thing and he try to make him happy. He does not care about money. But he loses his money by buying things he does not need them. Most of times, he fells sadness, he also through it a way. This is the reason to call them impulsive shopper.

The last type of shopper is that one he does not buy any thing. You can call this type by silly shopper. In fact this shopper goes for shopping more than the other shopper but he is expressing than the other when they buy. Actually the last one he does not buy any thing, he also think all the time about the money. Although he goes for shopping and enjoy himself in the shop, he does not lost his money any way. In the other hand, when he admire some think, he get confuse to buy it or not. In fact he could not decide immediately. Therefore windows shopper prefers hung around that go shopping and he like the money ore than any thing also.

To sum up, there three types of shopper are intelligent shopper, impulsive shopper and windows shopper. The intelligent shopper likes to arrange his schedules when he goes shopping. In the other hand the impulsive shopper he does not think about the money he just buy whatever he likes. Not to those two shoppers is the window shopper who goes shopping without spending the money. Actually, I hope everyone to be an intelligent shopper.

thanks

alashmori
alashmori   
Nov 17, 2007
Essays / I need help to write a classification essay about shopper [6]

geating!!

Thank you Sarah. In fact it will pleasure me when you will help me in my essay. Sarah before I start writing my essay i want to look in my supporing.

I think about how to support my idea but I do not fined good supporting sentenses. In the end I look if I can write about thier habit, the advantage for it and the disadvantage. that what I can find but I hope if you have any idea tp help me.

also if i have any mistake in my sturacture or my spelling, I wich to correct them.

thanks
alashmori   
Nov 16, 2007
Essays / I need help to write a classification essay about shopper [6]

greetings!!

In fact i have some problems in classification essay writing. In fact the problem i can not categorizing the topic into principles. Sometimes i could divided it but my principle is not general that i can supporting my idea in the body paragraph, asa u can see that make my essay very weak, am i a right?

Now I have this topic "shopper" if I divided it to three categories base on them habit into: intelligent shopper, impassive shopper and Window shopper, do u think it is good idea.

I'm waiting for ur help as soon as possible because i have an exam in writing in the end of this week.

thank you.
alashmori   
Nov 11, 2007
Grammar, Usage / My vocabulary drives me crizy!! [4]

Greating!

thanks for ur help and i will try to do by ur advice

also i wish ur help to improve my language

thanks
alashmori   
Nov 9, 2007
Speeches / Suggesting a few ideas about Qualities of a good speech [11]

greatings!

It is agreat idea ot know the qualities of a good speech.

1- I think good speech sould be discussing from the audience.

2- I think good speech let the audience fell or imagine it.

3- the speaker attitude give the audience portary about the quality of speech
alashmori   
Nov 9, 2007
Grammar, Usage / My vocabulary drives me crizy!! [4]

greatings!

I'm new here and this is my first particibating.
first of all, it was my pleasure to be one of Essay Forum member and to have your help.
secondly, I'm not professour in english and I have a lot of problem that make me crizy.

In fact, the biggest problem facing me is the vocabulary. I do not know how to improve it, I'm so weak in it. As you can see vocabulary is the most important part in english, by it you will be able to do well in reading and writing, right? If it come to the scond problem it will be in writing. The problem in my writing is when I write an essay I usually use long sentence which lose the writing grab.

In the end, I want to tell you that is all my problem and now I ask you for helping.
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