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Welcome to My world.. [4]
this essay about myself....I'd like you to grade it for me( a. b . c) by tha way I'm an esl student.
On December22 1989, in the middle of the night almost every
body was sleeping. My family was in the hospital waiting for me
to come to this life. At that time, they did not know my name yet,
but they just knew that I was a baby boy. As my father said" the
room was crowded. Every one came to see you. At dawn almost all
of them fell in sleep except me, I stayed beside your mother..."
One year later my father decided to go to America because he
felt he would have a better chance than in Jordan .At that time we
faced a lot of problems. I believe that it is very difficult to be a
single mother with four children, but fortunately my mother was
smart enough to cope with the life demands.
At the age of 4, I started to go to school. It was a lot of fun. I
liked it. I was in private school. Then, after ninth grade, I switched
to a public school. Generally, my grade point average was good.
I am the youngest in my family, therefore, I don’t have a lot of
things to be responsible for. After high school I was confused
about what I should do, stay in Jordan or go to America. I decided,
like my father had done before, and I said, may be I would have a
better chance in America.
THIS is my story, which I have not shared with anyone except
you. Finally, I have found someone beside my family that I shared
my happy moments, my sad ones and the obstacles that faced me
during my life. Once again welcome to my world.
