Essays / Accents and dialects (the difficulties of understanding different dialects) [6]

Firstly , Thanks Lizzie for your cooperation
secondly, I always ask guys because i know they WILL help me but im not sure about others
by the way ideas dont come to me easily but once i get one or just a hint ,, i can write hundreds
of pages about that topic and thats what i want, only a hint (if i can say ):P then ill carry on by myself

And why do you think im a kooter with no balls ?

Undergraduate / Life journey and turning points (statement of purpose) [6]

done well Joshua !

But i think you want to make your introduction more academic by adding a PROPER thesis statement which will be an excellant outline for your essay! and then you might end up changing your body paragraph

overall the essay is OK

Undergraduate / Honor Code essay. How do I make this more fun to read? [3]

hello !!

in order to make any essay better you have to add something funny BUT be aware that you are not allowed to add that funny thing in the body paragraph ONLY in either the introduction or the conclusion .

what is that funny thing ?

it could be an interesting thing that reader want to read about . you can also change the title into .somethin interesting which i prefer to be a vague title like adding those words this , it , that .. etc

fo example , my essay is about why student shou;d go to the gym ?
the proper title is "Your body will like that!"

Undergraduate / Johns Hopkins Supplement- Why I chose undecided major in engineering [4]

I am sorry but what kind of wirting is that ,, is it academic or what ...

Undergraduate / Two Short UVA Essays: Orwell's "1984" and the word maverick [4]

Well Veronica ,,, it was good ,However , in my opinion , the first one is better ,, because ,,, in the first essay ,, you have got a proper introduction and and a slightly good conclusion ,, but what i recommend is ,, to add something else , so instead of talking about only one thing you might talk about another thing at the same time .. for example , you can say that "There are many things in my life have got the opportunity to challenge me ,however, things have surprised me the most are ... and ... " then you keep going on ,, explaining how and why .

That was my opinion ^_^

Essays / My academic life is like .... [7]

yeeeeah ... he is ismaeel
what about u ?

Essays / My academic life is like .... [7]

In fact , this is my task
You will introduce yourself in a one page composition that compares your academic life to something.

You will demonstrate your skills of choosing a good topic and emphasizing important, interesting and original information.

Essays / My academic life is like .... [7]

no guys! you dont understand ,,,, I mean I dont have to write about my own academic life ,,, but I can write about anyones else ,,, the problem is the title cuz it has to be "my academic life like something " and i dont know whats gonna be ,,, i have to compare my academic life with "something" and tell why it looks like "something" ,,, a friend of mine wrote "my academic life is like race in the dark" ,,, and one more thing I'm in my second year in Computer Engineering ,,, so plz help me ,,,

Thanks,,,