Writing Feedback / TASK2 Nowadays, more and more people choose to be parents later. Several reasons and various effects [2]

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In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life.

What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

Nowadays, more and more people choose to be parents later. There could be several reasons for this case, and the development has various effects on both social and family life.

Two main factors may contribute to the phenomenon of parents opt for raising children subsequently around the world. The fear of financial and emotionally unstable after bringing up a child is worried by some couples. The birth of a child means not only to spend for material needs but also to invest time and energy in helping him grow up. Some are ambitious, living their lives with the aim of achieving and accomplish specific goals first before stepping up into the world of parenting. They have to finish their own targets, like getting job promotion with good salaries or buying a house fully paid, after that the children will take into consideration.

However, the delay in having children can attribute to several effects. Having a baby afterward will cause an increase in aging population in the future. For the prospective of the society, caused by the gap in the age structure of the workforce, the aging society filled with elderly people is more likely to suffer from labor shortage. For the children whose parents choose to have children late, they have to face the need to take care of the elderly members, which is widely known as financial and emotional needs and costs for them.

In conclusion, young adults who prefer to have children later in their life may lead to aging population in the future with drawbacks to both society and family, whereas help them with a better beginning for the birth of children at the same time.

Writing Feedback / TASK 1 - RADIO AND TV; the proportion of the audiences in the UK of radio and TV throughout the day [2]

TASK 1 ABOUT RADIO AND TV

The line graph compares the proportion of the audiences in the UK of radio and television throughout the day from October to December in the year of 1992 .

It is clear that most people in the UK prefer to listen to the radio at morning and watch the television at dinner time, while the rates showed almost equal percent at the middle of the day and night.

In 1992, about 8% of residents in the UK turned up the radio to start the day, the rates saw a rapid rose to 28% arrived at the peak around 8.30 am, while some individuals chosen to open the television at approximately 7% when having the breakfast. At the moon, a general decline can be witnessed in the listeners of the radio until the midnight. By contrast, although the rates of television audiences experienced some fluctuations, a dramatic increase provided by the people opt for watching television.

Before the 2 p.m, the rates of the audiences overtook the listeners of the radio at 25% and saw a shape growth reaching the peak at 47% at 8 p.m. Compere to the stable decease of the radio listeners, the proportion of the television showed a surge decline from 43% to 3% stood at the similar amounts of the radio at the end of the period.

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