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nguyenyenchi

Jan 2, 2022

Undergraduate / About my family and friends - TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE [4]

"Unfortunately, this honesty is not always perceived positively by others." can be changed to "Unfortunately, my honesty is not always perceived positively by others".

nguyenyenchi

Jan 2, 2022

Letters / Motivation letter for Master's application to the Graduate Insisute of Geneva [4]

@Zoi
In my opinion, "The Graduate Institute is a distinctive learning environment; it may not be right for everyone" should be "Though the Graduate Institute is a distinctive learning environment, it may not be right for everyone".

nguyenyenchi

Jan 2, 2022

Writing Feedback / TASK 1 IELTS - why adults choose to study and how to share learning fees [4]

DIFFICULT WRITING TASK 1 IELTS

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart show the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report to a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

The first chart answers the question of why adults choose to study. The two most popular reasons are because of their interests in the subject and their aims to gain qualification, respectively at 40% and 38%. Three other options are "helpful for current job", "to improve prospects of promotion", "enjoy learning/studying", all of which were chosen by roughly 20%. The next-to-last option is "to be able to change jobs" chosen by 12% of the interviewees. "To meet other people" are at the bottom of the graph with only 9%. The second chart expresses people's opinions on how to share adult learning fees. They think 40% of the fee should go to individuals and 35% go to employers while the rest should be the taxpayers'.

the graph