Scholarship / Serving for health - GKS graduate degree program, personal statement [3]

@ll12
Your paper is good, but it lacks some details about your traits of character, own achievements, and so on. What guide did you use to write it? I plan to submit the personal statement soon and decided to write it alone. Finding a guide turned out to be a big problem. I tried to find the solution for my problem on the Internet, but it turned out that not so many guides on paper writing are effective. If you decide to rerite/check your paper once again, please, get acquainted with this information first

Research Papers / Does getting a college degree guarantee you will have the career you love? [3]

Never. I got a degree in English language and Literature and work in a completely different field. I like my job, but my attitude towards it has no connection with my degree.

Undergraduate / Leadership and problem-solving skills - choosing your program and Waterloo [3]

Is the length of paper enough? I think you can add some more convincing info

Research Papers / Because a patient's life can be more unpleasant than death, they should have a right to choose [3]

Personally, I opt for euthanasia and support your point of view, but you have to find a few more reason to present the other side of this dilemma, although your paper is rather good.

Scholarship / Designing, assessing, economic policy - Letter of motivation for Erasmus Mundus EPOG+ [4]

I'm not an expert in writing the motivation letters, statements of purpose, etc., but your paper looks good enough.