Lebica_97
Aug 3, 2022
Writing Feedback / In some cultures, the old is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Both views [4]
In place of on the other hand you can use however or apparently
Like you compared both the era perfectly in first paragraph , I feel that the same should be continue in further paragraph. So that you can give your clear opinion simulatenuosly.
Essays become more impressive with quotes so if possible please use one (not more than two ).
You did a good job with the flow.
All the best
In place of on the other hand you can use however or apparently
Like you compared both the era perfectly in first paragraph , I feel that the same should be continue in further paragraph. So that you can give your clear opinion simulatenuosly.
Essays become more impressive with quotes so if possible please use one (not more than two ).
You did a good job with the flow.
All the best