Writing Feedback / The diagrams below show the site of a school and the plan for changes to the school site. [2]

school site diagrams

The stride of an unknown school site from 2004 to 2024 is illustrated in the two maps given.
Overall, there will be some amelioration taking place in the school site over twenty years with the most significant change in the number of students.

In greater detail, there will be 1,000 students studying in the school whereabouts, which will be 400 students greater than it was in 2004. In terms of the west, the road, the driveway and the main entrance will be retained their functions and positions. In addition, a path will be constructed so that School Building 1 and 2 can be linked at the expense of dwindling the length of a path which used to be connected with the main entrance.

As far as the others are concerned, sundry plants will be chopped down to make room for another car park adjacent to the newly-set-up School Buiding 3 in the east of the location which will be engaged with a newly-built road. Finally, the sport field will be narrowed and re-positioned at the side of Car Park 2.

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Writing Feedback / Renovations in the sports centres - IELTS WRITING TEST 4 CAMBRIDGE 13 [2]

university sports centre - present and future

Task 1:
The advance of an unknown university sports centre from the contemporary time to the future is illustrated in the two maps given.
Overall, there will be several practical renovations taking place in the sports centre according to the plan with the most significant change which is being made in the area surrounding the present indoor zone of the centre.

In greater detail, the area of the sports centre will be enlarged at the expense of eliminating two outdoor courts. Beside, the fitness centre which is arranged in the north of the 25-metre pool will be levelled up in terms of magnitude. A new sports hall will be opened up adjacent to the seating area.

Regarding the others, a new sports hall will be opened up adjacent to the seating area. The two prospective dance studios will be introduced in the northeast corner of the centre. A new pool whose use is for recreation will be construced to the west. Moreover, the number of changing rooms will increase as the two other ones will be constructed in the corner of the centre. Finally, a new cafe will be added at the side of the southeast changing room, whereas a sports store will be opened up next to the southwest counterpart.

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