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Name: duiter
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May 4, 2023
Writing Feedback / Opinion essay: Some people think news has no connection to people's lives. [3]

Last paragraph : In conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that recent news is always in connection with people's life because it provides enough human beings with up-to-date information. However, it is always advisable that the general public should catch up on hot news on a fairly regular basis.
duiter1   
May 4, 2023
Writing Feedback / Essay: should students have a part-time job [5]

Last paragraph : To conclude, having a part-time job along with studying brings students a substantial number of benefits. In spite of the fact that it has the potential of distracting students themselves from studying, the major advantages far outweigh the downsides
duiter1   
Apr 29, 2023
Writing Feedback / How has the Internet changed the way we form and maintain friendship? [2]

In the modern times, the Internet has significantly altered how we make and cement lasting friendships. In this essay I will explore several methods the Internet can use to develop a deep friendship.

In general, there are a number of ways the Internet can explore to foster friendship. Perhaps the most significant way of this is that we can make and keep firm friendships with someone staying thousands miles away. Unlike in the dim and distant past, when the Internet is not available and only snail mail is readily available, nowadays you can easily find and stay real friends you desperately want on the Internet 24 hours.

Another highly effective method on the Internet to cement friendship is that you can send and receive e-greetings, videos, photos much quicker. For example, in the distant past, you have to go to post office to send greeting cards, videos, and photos whereas now you can easily send it on the Internet at home within seconds, which, in turn, leads to saving money and travel time. Similarly, you can receive e-greetings, videos and photos instantly at your home without going to post office several hundreds or thousands miles away in the freezing winter or in the scorching summer to collect greetings cards or VHS videos, which means that you can avoid frostbite or heatstroke respectively.

In summary, in my opinion, The Internet has helped develop intimate friendships more efficient in term of availability and speed, which inevitably brings about saving time and money
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