Han Yujin
Jun 21, 2024
Student Talk / I am a bit shy, when I have to speak in English, I always worry about my mistakes; I lack confidence [38]
same problems =))))
same problems =))))
Han Yujin
Jun 21, 2024
Han Yujin
Jun 21, 2024
Student Talk / Reading : 9.0 - Just got my IELTS result. [19]
Congratulation!!!!! Can you show me some tips to learn Speaking pls :>>>>>
Congratulation!!!!! Can you show me some tips to learn Speaking pls :>>>>>
Han Yujin
Jun 14, 2024
Writing Feedback / All children should be made to wear school uniforms. To what extent do you agree or disagree? [2]
In this day and age, there is an opinion that all kids should be forced to wear school uniforms. From my perspective, i partly agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, the option to force children to wear school uniforms is attractive for several reasons.The first reason is that uniforms can promote equality. They can reduce the differences in clothing between students from different economic backgrounds. Because everyone wear the same clothing, it can eliminate the chances of conflicts related to clothing. The second one is that school uniforms can promote safety. They can help staffs in school identify the students who are learning in their school, and also avoid strangers from the outside entering school and harming other students. This is really important with schools , especially the ones which have a large campus.
Despite the above-mentioned advantages, i think that school uniforms also have some weaknesses. Firstly, rich and poor will still be easily differentiated . Unfortunately , school uniforms can not remove this problem. This issue affects students, especially poor ones obviously. For example, the rich students' uniforms are very clean ,while uniforms of many poor students are not as neat and smooth as the rich ones because they have to buy clothes from former students. Secondly, school uniforms cause families waste additional money for buying extra clothes.This can be a burden with many families , especially the ones who have poverty. It because uniforms often cost expensive to bring students a good quality and have many types from winter to summer clothes. Therefore, many poor families have to borrow more money from other people to buy these clothes to help children focuse on studying completely.
In conclusion, children should be forced to wear school uniforms. These clothes can promote equality between students from different types of background, and also improve the school's' safety. However, they can not remove the problem between rich and poor students, and even make the poor families become poorer.
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In this day and age, there is an opinion that all kids should be forced to wear school uniforms. From my perspective, i partly agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, the option to force children to wear school uniforms is attractive for several reasons.The first reason is that uniforms can promote equality. They can reduce the differences in clothing between students from different economic backgrounds. Because everyone wear the same clothing, it can eliminate the chances of conflicts related to clothing. The second one is that school uniforms can promote safety. They can help staffs in school identify the students who are learning in their school, and also avoid strangers from the outside entering school and harming other students. This is really important with schools , especially the ones which have a large campus.
Despite the above-mentioned advantages, i think that school uniforms also have some weaknesses. Firstly, rich and poor will still be easily differentiated . Unfortunately , school uniforms can not remove this problem. This issue affects students, especially poor ones obviously. For example, the rich students' uniforms are very clean ,while uniforms of many poor students are not as neat and smooth as the rich ones because they have to buy clothes from former students. Secondly, school uniforms cause families waste additional money for buying extra clothes.This can be a burden with many families , especially the ones who have poverty. It because uniforms often cost expensive to bring students a good quality and have many types from winter to summer clothes. Therefore, many poor families have to borrow more money from other people to buy these clothes to help children focuse on studying completely.
In conclusion, children should be forced to wear school uniforms. These clothes can promote equality between students from different types of background, and also improve the school's' safety. However, they can not remove the problem between rich and poor students, and even make the poor families become poorer.
PLEASE SCORE MY ESSAY AND GIVE FEEDBACK!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH !!!