tjbeyer6
Nov 29, 2009
Undergraduate / UC Personal Statement Prompt 2 about Badminton [7]
pretty good
i think you got wordy and had some run on sentences
try to make it more concise
also i dont like to ending im not sure whether its serious or comedic or whatever just feels weird to me, but I love the badminton describtion love the sport. Try to put your on personal touches on it rather than it being just a comeback story that can seem generic. Overall, its a good start
hope I helped!!!
pretty good
i think you got wordy and had some run on sentences
try to make it more concise
also i dont like to ending im not sure whether its serious or comedic or whatever just feels weird to me, but I love the badminton describtion love the sport. Try to put your on personal touches on it rather than it being just a comeback story that can seem generic. Overall, its a good start
hope I helped!!!