Undergraduate / Common App Essay: A Dream with all my Dreams [8]

I agree with the comment above me. A more in-depth analysis of why you want to become a professor would really enhance the essay.

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Undergraduate / 'color strikes' - COMMON APP SHORT ANSWER- PAINTING [6]

This is a well-written short answer. The emotion and feelings that are displayed through your figurative language is remarkable.

Can you please give me feedback on my essay?