Posts by hellokitty15

hellokitty15

Jan 2, 2010

Undergraduate / College Rap on "Perseverance " for UVA, Lemme know what you think? [7]

This is definitely unique, and i could feel the beat in it as i read it. The bottom paragraph was the only part where I struggled getting the beat. But other than that it was fun and made me laugh...in a good way :D

Good Luck!

hellokitty15

Jan 2, 2010

Undergraduate / Hispanic Terrorists - national concern and its importance to me [2]

I wrote my essay about my community, I kind of rushed the second half of it, any advice would be nice! :D
Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.

Let us take a journey into the halls of the most infamous high school in the Coachella Valley; Coachella Valley High School. Defined as the institution with the worst students, my classmates seem to embrace this title by their unwillingness to take action. As we venture through the halls, you will see nothing more that the color brown, reflecting what my hometown consists of; Hispanics.

As I write this, I think about the ...
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