abieyuwa
Jan 1, 2010
Undergraduate / "Buenos días, Madrid" - BATES Comment, [4]
I love the imagey used in the first paragraph. It grabbed my attention. I also like how you incorporated the "Ciao, hola, 'hello!". this is really good. great job. Sorry for my meaningless previous critique. first time on site =)
I love the imagey used in the first paragraph. It grabbed my attention. I also like how you incorporated the "Ciao, hola, 'hello!". this is really good. great job. Sorry for my meaningless previous critique. first time on site =)