pridge1
Jan 4, 2010
Undergraduate / Media and Communications, EMERSON COLLEGE-SUPPLEMENT-HELP [4]
I do not respond with activities such as volleyball, reading, playing the piano, or drawing
^ that needs to be would not because the first part of the sentence is past tense, try reading it aloud with would not.
my response is always "Words are my passion.
^also need to change the tense
..try "Instead, my response would always be "words are my passion."
One can mix and match words and connect them to create a story, am image
^typo on am image..should be an image
but i don't understand how words can make images
I do like how you connected your passion for words to you're major :)
I do not respond with activities such as volleyball, reading, playing the piano, or drawing
^ that needs to be would not because the first part of the sentence is past tense, try reading it aloud with would not.
my response is always "Words are my passion.
^also need to change the tense
..try "Instead, my response would always be "words are my passion."
One can mix and match words and connect them to create a story, am image
^typo on am image..should be an image
but i don't understand how words can make images
I do like how you connected your passion for words to you're major :)