Writing Feedback / My Last weekend: "working around the house" [3]

My Last weekendPlease correct me

My Last weekend

Last Friday I heard from the internet and also from school about the snowy weather. So, in that specific day I was going to out early from school before started the snow. So the day passed not as usual; picking my son from school early, shopping some foods from supermarket as the same time because the snow was already begin to raining. The main things I did this weekend were I wrote my assignment and I read from the magazine that our teacher gave me last Friday.

Since I started these classes, I spend all my spare time by reading my homework and reading and listening and searching related things on the internet to improve my English. So on Saturday, I spent a lot of my time by exercising how to write my essay. After I finished my essay I got time to spend with my family.

The next day, Sunday, I got up in the morning and make a breakfast for my family and for myself. After breakfast I and my family usually went to church but this Sunday we couldn't go to church as usual because of snow. In addition, there was no transportation service. But I dressed well for the cold weather and I got out in front of our home with my family and had fun with snow and also took nice pictures too.

Finally, I finished the snow fun, I got a little rest at home spend the rest of my time by watching TV and different kinds of movies. This weekend passed by working around the house it was my weekend it passed by working around the house. I really enjoyed my weekend this way I am ok with it.

Writing Feedback / My best friend (despite of living in different countries) [5]

Friends are good if we are got our special one. In our childhood we have got lots of friends but that doesn't mean they all are our best friends. Best friend is someone special for you.

When I was a little girl I used to play with my age mates but there is my favorite age mate girl Hanna. Of course I love them all but she was my favorite and my special. I really liked way she plays, talks and everything that she has was good for me.

She was so honest, with good behavior and also very friendly. when we were together we used to play ball, jump rope, hide and sick and different kinds of playing. If anything is wrong or misunderstanding between us while we were played, we tried to fix it by ourselves immediately and continued our plying.

Hanna was also so kind to me. When Hanna's mother gave her something to eat, she saved to me and brought to me while we mate again. She did this almost all the time. That was so nice of her.

We also continued our friendships and went the same high school together. We were happy at that time. Because we knew each other, and we love each other we also share our feelings secretly together. When we were a high school, at the end of the week always we both got a pocket money from our parents. We shared everything we had and we also exchange gifts each other we also going together to watch movies.

We were friends since we are little girls. Even though we are living different countries, we also are still best friends as usual. I am very lucky that I have a best friend with whom I can share my feelings.