Undergraduate / Common App Transfer Essay- The storm is now sunshine [5]

For transfer essays, you should personalize them for each college by adding a paragraph or so. Explain why you chose that specific college and what you hope to gain form attending that college.

For example, I am transfering to UT Austin and one of the reasons I want to transfer is because of the research opportunities, and the different cultural activities available there.

Overall, the essay is good.

Undergraduate / "My journey moving to another country" - UT Austin Statement of purpose [6]

Your essay is really good, but you should include within the essay a section about research opportunities that interest you or degree programs that would benefit you. Do a little bit of research on programs in UT Austin and even on some professors whom you would like to be taught by, or work with in the various programs.