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airman

Jul 17, 2010

Writing Feedback / The main purpose of art is not to teach, but to show [3]

Q12. "The main purpose of art is not to teach, but to show " Discuss.

Question Analysis:

Art(content): Can take on forms such as performing arts, sculptures, paintings&drawings, architecture)

Purposes of art:

Entertainment
Expression
Exhibition

Thesis:

Despite the fact that there are many various purposes of art, which includes entertainment, expression as well as exhibition, the basic purpose of art is to exhibit thus the basic purpose of art is not to teach, but to show.

Points anyone? Your help will be greater appreciated.

airman

Jul 17, 2010

Writing Feedback / The increasing number of overweight children [3]

i think that you need to explain on the means to prevent it and whether it will actually work. I get your point that it is futile to point fingers at those who are responsible but you need to understand that without doing so, those who are the causes for overgrowing children might actually 'overwrite' the existence for prevention. Example: A parent who buys fast-food for his child who exercises often might still cause him to become fat

airman

Jul 17, 2010

Writing Feedback / Most beneficail discovery in the last 100 yrs; Transportation, Communication [20]

All discovery helped to human for their easier life.
This statement is very vague

airman

May 16, 2010

Essays / Prisons do more harm than good. Do you agree? [5]

Ok i did what you told me. Thank you! (:

airman

Apr 25, 2010

Essays / Prisons do more harm than good. Do you agree? [5]

Prisons do more harm than good. Do you agree?
I'm really sure about what to write about this, the poonts i have so far are that prisons do harm by teaching people to act aggressively to get what they want and that it helps in rehabilitation.

Any more points?