Graduate / SOP for MA in Art Ed. Explain your purpose for graduate study [4]

Explain your purpose for graduate study, including your current degree goals and reasons for selecting a particular field of study.

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Art is a visual language. My first design teacher, Peter Smith, often made this statement to our class. Those are the words that occur to me every time I begin a new project. What will this piece say? What emotions will this silent voice invoke? Peter's statement changed the way I approach creating and understanding art. It was because of teachers like him, I was motivated to continue an education in art and go on to work in the field of design and digital photography.

My first introduction to art was in my high school ceramics class. It was the first time I was encouraged to express my own views in class. Mr. Lovett taught our class to take all our built up emotions and give it over to what we were creating. To be in a classroom environment where there was no wrong answer, but an infinite variation of the right answer, was eye opening. In that class I discovered I wanted to be an artist.

In college, I traded the idea of becoming a "starving artist" for a more practical career in medicine. This decision led me to severely struggle my first few years of college. I could not replicate the same feeling of enjoyment in my pre med studies as I could when creating art. As a result, I switched my focus from Pre Med to Art.

In the art department, I encountered inspiring teachers such as, Peter Smith and Onlyie Onlyie. These teachers had a fire inside of them kindled by their passion for art. Their teaching style motivated me to want to learn more. Through their guidance I began to see the philosophies of art in everything around me. Using art as a connecting factor, I began to understand and enjoy all my studies. My art teacher's ability to captivate my mind through ideas of art, greatly aided me in graduating college and finding a career I truly enjoy.

I often reflect back to those teachers and the advice they gave me. Ideas such as: "Less is more" and Art is a visual language" has guided me through many projects. It is because of what these teachers have bestowed upon me; I have decided to teach. I want to give others the opportunity to understand the world through art's eyes. I want to put the same fire to learn into my future student as my teachers put into me, making them a more successful student. Possibly leading them to find their own voice, and discover a career that can bring them fulfillment.

I believe that I am at a point in my life where I have the maturity and creative skills to teach. I am just lacking the education to do this. University of Florida's Master's of Art in Art Education program is ideal for me, because it will give me the needed skills to teach, while allowing me time to continue working and strengthening my skills as a graphic designer and digital photographer.