Writing Feedback / BARRON'S TOEFL "Advances in transportation and communication" [2]

Advances in transportation and communication like te airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.

In my meditation, away from daily life's hustle, I started thinking impressibly about the improvement has been acquired to human beings society all over the globe and that led me to realize that the internet is one of the most effective innovations with positive impacts on our life.

To have a look at some of these good impacts, I would start with learning as an example. The internet has provided a lot of facilities for educational circumstances, For example, an instructor can start teaching the class from somewhere else which in he(or she) is by using the internet. As well as, there have been quickly effective communications between the teachers and the classmates about homework and projects through emails and groups like forums. Moreover, Distance learning through the internet has created a big chance to learn while staying home or at work. In addition, googling through the internet is the most helpful way for the researchers to find what they are looking for or to publish their accomplishments. Moving to marketing, using the internet in advertising has decreased the cost, as well as, it has increased the numbers of audiences. At the domain of management, the internet has an effective role in saving time and efforts of paper work while it is still documented. Furthermore, there have been good opportunities of jobs for professionals like webpage designers, for example. In social life, people have communicated and interacted in visible and audible way around the globe which expands the knowledge about the cultures worldwide.

Although it has been a double edges sword like most innovations, After all, people can find their demands like jobs, relationships, education, entertainment and so on in the internet. In my view, the internet has been the seed of globalization.

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Writing Feedback / BARRON'S TOEFL IBT BOOK "learning a foreign language" [4]

Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint.

Nowadays, some people tend to invest in their own potential by improving and exploiting their capacity, And learning a foreign language is a sort of such investment. But unfortunently, the opportunity to learn a language in the country it is spoken in is not allways available for the ones who hope to get it, So, people who have got this chance are lucky.

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Research Papers / BARRON'S TOEFL IBT BOOK "advantages vs disadvantages of studying aboard" [5]

Studying aboard is a good chance for a person to discover himself deeply. In my view, I will challenge myself in different ways to adapt to circumences in this experience. For example, the first disadvantage I think about is the culture shock that I'll face. More over, I'll need time to understand and speak a language which is tottaly different from my mother tongue. Further more, the feeling of missing people and places backhome will adversly impact my grades in study and that will for sure frustrate me. In the other hand, I will get so much advantages from studuing aboard. For instance, I'll graduate from an international accreditated institution and that will expand my opportunity in finding a job. No doubt that living in an other country and meeting different people will make me open mind and will improve my dialog with members from other cultures. Further more, this experience will increase my knowledge and my life's experiences by being independent and take care of my self along with studying. Therefore, I'll be saticfied by daring myself to face what I am afraid of. In conclusion, studying aboard has so much more advantages comparing with disadvantages of such experience.