Editor1010
Oct 9, 2010
Undergraduate / Track and Field -Short Answer Edit for College Application: Extracurricular Activity [3]
Reword this sentence its some what a run on.
I never let my partial disability get the way of what I wanted to accomplish. Quitting was never an option for me even when I got injured and pulled out for a part of the season.
Dedication is a very important moral to me.
I never missed a practice or a meet unless it was absolutely necessary and I never stopped working on my events, like the eight hundred meter relay. I dont like this part :/
You can elaborate more on this part " I love being apart of a team, which actually seemed more like a family. "
through out your short answer talk more about how working as a team helped you
Reword this sentence its some what a run on.
I never let my partial disability get the way of what I wanted to accomplish. Quitting was never an option for me even when I got injured and pulled out for a part of the season.
Dedication is a very important moral to me.
I never missed a practice or a meet unless it was absolutely necessary and I never stopped working on my events, like the eight hundred meter relay. I dont like this part :/
You can elaborate more on this part " I love being apart of a team, which actually seemed more like a family. "
through out your short answer talk more about how working as a team helped you
