antdance011
Feb 10, 2011
antdance011
Feb 7, 2011
antdance011
Feb 5, 2011
Dissertations / The Passionate Shepherd Thesis statement [5]
Thesis Statement
The passionate yet lonely shepherd wants a lady to come live him and be his love Christopher Marlowe is simply trying to capture the joy of simple and uncomplicated love. Although the shepherd knows he's not rich he will offer her all the pleasures that nature provides. Then later on in life he will give his love all the expensive gifts and more that will make her happy. The shepherd is offering his proposal for her love throughout the entire poem.
needs advice please
Thesis Statement
The passionate yet lonely shepherd wants a lady to come live him and be his love Christopher Marlowe is simply trying to capture the joy of simple and uncomplicated love. Although the shepherd knows he's not rich he will offer her all the pleasures that nature provides. Then later on in life he will give his love all the expensive gifts and more that will make her happy. The shepherd is offering his proposal for her love throughout the entire poem.
needs advice please
antdance011
Oct 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "when i dance its great" - activity, interest FAMU ESSAY NEEDS ADVICE [10]
thanks so much
its only suppose to be 250 words but thanks alot
thanks so much
its only suppose to be 250 words but thanks alot
antdance011
Oct 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "to be sucessful and make something of myself" - Life Goals Essay [5]
graduatehigh graduate high
most knowledge of my ability possible most knowledge i could possible contain
graduatehigh graduate high
most knowledge of my ability possible most knowledge i could possible contain
antdance011
Oct 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "when i dance its great" - activity, interest FAMU ESSAY NEEDS ADVICE [10]
thank you so much for helping me
umm...this is it with the corrections and do you think i should add something or is that good enough
When I step into a mirror filled room, I feel like I am home, but I am not. I am only attending a lesson at my dance studio or at my school. It gives me that joyful and happy feeling like I just won the lottery. When I'm dancing, I'm not the same person I am inside the classroom because when I dance, I feel like I can truly express who I am.. When I'm having trouble at home I know I can go to the dance studio and take a class that will change my entire mood upside down. Being the only male dancer on my high school dance team, it was an honor for me to receive the accolade of co-captain. Although dance is not my major, its still meaningful to me. It has taught me many lessons in life that I know I will be able to use in the future.I know when I'm having a problem or I am stressed out, I can always turn to something that soothes me: dancing. That studio that is filled with mirrors makes me feel like I am safe and secure. No one can tell me different.
thank you so much for helping me
umm...this is it with the corrections and do you think i should add something or is that good enough
When I step into a mirror filled room, I feel like I am home, but I am not. I am only attending a lesson at my dance studio or at my school. It gives me that joyful and happy feeling like I just won the lottery. When I'm dancing, I'm not the same person I am inside the classroom because when I dance, I feel like I can truly express who I am.. When I'm having trouble at home I know I can go to the dance studio and take a class that will change my entire mood upside down. Being the only male dancer on my high school dance team, it was an honor for me to receive the accolade of co-captain. Although dance is not my major, its still meaningful to me. It has taught me many lessons in life that I know I will be able to use in the future.I know when I'm having a problem or I am stressed out, I can always turn to something that soothes me: dancing. That studio that is filled with mirrors makes me feel like I am safe and secure. No one can tell me different.
antdance011
Oct 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "when i dance its great" - activity, interest FAMU ESSAY NEEDS ADVICE [10]
more corrections and a little bit extra to finish it off
more corrections and a little bit extra to finish it off
antdance011
Oct 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "when i dance its great" - activity, interest FAMU ESSAY NEEDS ADVICE [10]
JUST THE START ANY SUGGESTIONS THINGS I NEED TO ADD OR CHANGE
Describe an activity, interest, experience, or achievement in your life (this could be a book, a movie, or an activity or experience at work, home, or school) that has been particularly meaningful for you.
When I step inside the room filled with mirrors and hardwood floors I feel like I am home but im just in the dance room at my school or at my dance studio . It gives me that joyful and happy feeling like I just won the lottery . When Im in dance, Im not the same person as I am inside the classroom. This is because when i dance I feel it is a great way for me to express what Ifeel. When I having trouble at home I know I can go to the dance studio and take a class that will change my hole entire mood upside down. Being the only male on my high school dance for a year and the next year Im co-cpatian means alot to me.
JUST THE START ANY SUGGESTIONS THINGS I NEED TO ADD OR CHANGE
Describe an activity, interest, experience, or achievement in your life (this could be a book, a movie, or an activity or experience at work, home, or school) that has been particularly meaningful for you.
When I step inside the room filled with mirrors and hardwood floors I feel like I am home but im just in the dance room at my school or at my dance studio . It gives me that joyful and happy feeling like I just won the lottery . When Im in dance, Im not the same person as I am inside the classroom. This is because when i dance I feel it is a great way for me to express what Ifeel. When I having trouble at home I know I can go to the dance studio and take a class that will change my hole entire mood upside down. Being the only male on my high school dance for a year and the next year Im co-cpatian means alot to me.
