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Nov 29, 2010
Writing Feedback / Déjŕ vu, I did it in reality - boyfriend essay story [5]
What's the prompt for this essay??
Well I thought it was an interesting read.
But, I don't know if it is appropriate for a college application..
I remember reading an article on what topics to avoid while writing a college application, and among the usual drugs, alcohol, and "the reason I went to jail..."-type essays were the "boyfriend" essays. I'm sure there are more important qualities about you that you can convey, other than how you dealt with a breakup. Remember, in high school, LOTS of girls/boys deal with bad relationships. Do you really want to make this the main focus of your essay? Do you have any passions? Outstanding qualities?
What's the prompt for this essay??
Well I thought it was an interesting read.
But, I don't know if it is appropriate for a college application..
I remember reading an article on what topics to avoid while writing a college application, and among the usual drugs, alcohol, and "the reason I went to jail..."-type essays were the "boyfriend" essays. I'm sure there are more important qualities about you that you can convey, other than how you dealt with a breakup. Remember, in high school, LOTS of girls/boys deal with bad relationships. Do you really want to make this the main focus of your essay? Do you have any passions? Outstanding qualities?