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Posts by greenlittlebean
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greenlittlebean   
Dec 28, 2010
Undergraduate / "waving guy" - Person who influenced you [8]

yes, elaborate,
you need to keep it real, keep it more personal, they want to know more about you
what you feel, and not the story itself
greenlittlebean   
Dec 28, 2010
Undergraduate / "I was ten-years-old when my parents informed me.." Rochester essay [3]

to my accent, my skin color, as well as my clothing.--- to my accent, skin color and clothing

to help my brother and parents make this transition----my family make this transition, keep it general, no need to go into details
greenlittlebean   
Dec 26, 2010
Undergraduate / "to explore more of what the world" -what you hope to accomplish as an undergraduate? [2]

okay, so i still have atleast 100 words i can add. My sentences arent smooth enough, please help

It's hard to comprehend how excited I am going to college. I have two main goals I hope to accomplish as an undergraduate in BU. I want to be able to experience diversity of cultures in BU and at the same time able to support myself financially, but most importantly, I want have an enough amount of time dedicated to helping people who needed.

By going to BU, I hope to explore more of what the world offers, I want to be more expose to other cultures, become more outgoing and sociable. BU will help me earn a degree in education that will help me support myself financially and help others at the same time.

Before I came to the U.S., I lived in China. There, every Sunday I go to church, the church locates in a neighborhood similar to a slum, and we would come across a dozen homeless people at a time. I would always give them money but the situation there just seems to get worse. On one particular Sunday I saw a boy around my age going through the garbage hoping to find anything useful. While looking at him, I thought to myself, I could have been that unfortunate boy. At that moment, I decided to dedicate my life to help others who needed.

In high school, I excel in all my art classes especially in graphic design, I enjoyed the class so much I want to major in the graphic design field. I first didn't feel strong about decision because I couldn't really do much to help people when I major in graphic design. But wanting to do what I love at the same time, I decided to compromise the two. I want to become a graphic designer who designs posters and through other media to promote awareness for people suffering from poverty. Since I had already started on this path, it will be great to be able to continue working for this cause if I get into BU.

Right now is already the twenty-first century, and there is still a huge amount of people suffering from poverty. I have strong faith that through BU I will be able to do my part to do my part to stop poverty in the world. My intended career might seem very useless in a big picture, but I believe individual matters, every bit will help.
greenlittlebean   
Dec 25, 2010
Undergraduate / University of Rochester in the field of engineering, subject and learning situations [3]

Write about the subjects and learning situations that interest you most, and how you intend to use your autonomy here.

I'm interested in the engineering field. It all started at the age of four when I started taking art classes. Since then art was a hobby of mine and I had always excel in it. After studying art for four years in two art high schools, this hobby of mine had became a career I want to pursue. Engineering is the specific field I want to go into, it involves designing and creating structures as well as science; both I have adequate experience in. Designing something is one of the best ways to express myself and it will serve the community at the same time. I believe that I will strive in University of Rochester in the field of engineering.
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