Undergraduate / "I plan to pursue is biology and become a doctor" - Why Emory College essay [4]

Hi. This is my supplement essay for Emory. I have the basic structure down, so it would be wonderful if I get feedback on how I could develop my ideas. Also, any suggestions for a better hook or attention grabber?

Thanks!

The Emory College of Arts and Sciences is a good match for me, because my academic interest that I plan to pursue is biology. I particularly wish to take advantage of the fabulous opportunities for undergraduate research offered by the Department of Biology. Because my career goal is to be a doctor, I plan to take all the required courses for medical school, major in biology, and conduct researches related to medicine. The O. Wayne Rollins Research Center and the Emory University School of Medicine that are divisions of the Emory University assure me that such researches that I conduct will be well supported in terms of faculty and facilities. The close affiliations among the Department of Biology, the medical school, and the state-of-the-art research laboratories at the research center motivate me to continue walking on the path to becoming a doctor at Emory.

Emory College's study abroad programs also fulfill my desire to discover the world. The fact that the Center for International Programs Abroad gives the students the opportunity to continue pursuing education in a different country and culture is appealing, because I will be able to study while coming in contact with diverse cultures and people. Since my major is biology, I am particularly interested in the biology program offered by Science Experience Abroad in Queensland, Australia. Through such programs, Emory College is a good match for my outgoing nature and desire to explore.

Undergraduate / "The Stranger and Meursault" - Brown: a book that has influenced you [6]

Hi. This is my supplement essay for Brown. I haven't spend that much time on it, so I wanted to know if the "influence" is clear to the reader. Any suggestion appreciated! =)

"So class, after we have read the first three chapters, we can already see that Meursault is a character that does not express his feelings and is completely indifferent to the society he is living in."

"Dude, he is just like you."

My friend snickered while sitting next to me in English class. He said those words in a completely light manner (and I responded with a chuckle), but those words struck me hard and continued to ring inside my head even as my teacher carried on with his lecture.

The book that we were reading for class was The Stranger by Albert Camus. It is a novel that describes how the protagonist, Meursault, is treated by society as "one of the different kind" due to his peculiar nature. He does not shed a single tear when he hears that his mother has died, he does not feel guilty after murdering a man, and he hardly interacts with other people, and even if he does, he does so in a cold, austere manner. He also simply goes along with what other people say without sharing his own opinion.

I admit that I have an introvertive nature, and perhaps that was why my friend next to me in English class last year joked how I was similar to Meursault, but honestly though, before I give the wrong impression, I am not a recluse. Meursault is an extreme case, a character fabricated by the existentialist mind of Camus, whereas I am a normal person who enjoys a social life. I do voice out my opinions when I need to, but at times my introvertive nature holds me back from doing so. I wanted my classmates to know that I do interact a lot. However, my friend's words corroborated the fact that people were still interpreting me as a quiet student. I did not want people to think of me that way. Every English class was going to be uneasy for me, because the novel The Stranger and Meursault were going to constantly remind me of my timidity. I had to do something quick...

"So class, what would you say is the likely theme of this novel?"

I thrust my hand in the air without even realizing. I could sense everyone was looking at me, surprised. I was the center of attention all of a sudden.

"Well, I guess what Camus is trying to convey to the reader is that..."

With the dead silence acting as a cue, I went on to answer the question eloquently. Actually, my voice did. My mind went on to cherish that moment when I shattered my classmates' typical image of me as a silent kid. I proved that I could speak up in class and shed my bashfulness. As I walked out of the room after the bell rang, I was determined to prove this fact to everyone else. Never was I going to be compared to Meursault again, even as a joke.