yummango
Dec 27, 2010
Undergraduate / "Rubber bands and synthesized rain at 3 AM" - Stanford Roommate Essay [7]
It's really good! I feel like I get a good sense of who you are.
It's really good! I feel like I get a good sense of who you are.
yummango
Dec 27, 2010
Undergraduate / (father debate, natural world, dishes) Why Stanford, Intellectual Vitality and Letter [8]
These essays are all really solid! Great job with them.
Only one thing, it's PPS not PSS
These essays are all really solid! Great job with them.
Only one thing, it's PPS not PSS
yummango
Dec 26, 2010
Undergraduate / "Make-up" Stanford Letter to Roommate [3]
I'm not sure if this is too girly/shallow... would really appreciate some feedback :) Thank you so much.
Stanford Short Essay
Letter to Roommate (250 word limit)
Hey!
Let me introduce myself through one of my obsessions, make-up.
I can't explain why I like make-up so much. It's just beautiful in the same way that poetry or food photography is. I appreciate the golden specks in a rose blush, the way creamy eyeliner slides on the skin, the rich texture of a pigmented eyeshadow. I'm weird that way though, and it's okay, you can tell me so-my friends do all the time.
My make-up bag is relatively simple. I carry concealer because I often have bags under my eyes from little sleep. I also have a lip-gloss in soft salmon, one of my favorite colors. It's just a nice, calm shade, kind of like me. I have a blush in the same color. In this way I'm soft and kind-I don't like when people poke fun at others for their clothes or apparent lack of intelligence or anything similarly transparent. But although I'm good-natured I do have a bold streak. I always wear eyeliner in electric blue or black, and occasionally I'll line my eyebrows so as to look more dramatic.
If you ever need any make-up don't hesitate to ask! I love showing others my passions, and I will positively jump to help you with math, lend you one of my books, or even do your make-up.
I'm not sure if this is too girly/shallow... would really appreciate some feedback :) Thank you so much.
Stanford Short Essay
Letter to Roommate (250 word limit)
Hey!
Let me introduce myself through one of my obsessions, make-up.
I can't explain why I like make-up so much. It's just beautiful in the same way that poetry or food photography is. I appreciate the golden specks in a rose blush, the way creamy eyeliner slides on the skin, the rich texture of a pigmented eyeshadow. I'm weird that way though, and it's okay, you can tell me so-my friends do all the time.
My make-up bag is relatively simple. I carry concealer because I often have bags under my eyes from little sleep. I also have a lip-gloss in soft salmon, one of my favorite colors. It's just a nice, calm shade, kind of like me. I have a blush in the same color. In this way I'm soft and kind-I don't like when people poke fun at others for their clothes or apparent lack of intelligence or anything similarly transparent. But although I'm good-natured I do have a bold streak. I always wear eyeliner in electric blue or black, and occasionally I'll line my eyebrows so as to look more dramatic.
If you ever need any make-up don't hesitate to ask! I love showing others my passions, and I will positively jump to help you with math, lend you one of my books, or even do your make-up.
