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Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / "traditionally with Islam" - Bowdoin Supplement- Intellectual Engagement [5]
Having been brought up rather traditionally with Islam playing an important role in my upbringing, my faith in my beliefs was unshakable. However, in O2 (10th grade)I would just say 2002 here, no need for the 10th grade specification I had an English teacher who had very strong opinions about how religon had to be kept away from the government in order for the government to be successful, and he was very vocal about his views in class. His opinions sparked rather heated arguments between him and his class, with his students mostly trying to prove his views wrong.But he was remarkably swift in striking down the opposition with a bevy of facts and figures from various sources to back his often controversial views. Even still, our class was a motivated bunch; every subsequent timeno need for a comma we too countered him with our own set of data. Although we never really got to winwon any of these debates, we did, however, inch closer and closer each time. Each time the arguments were more heated, more well-backed, and more interesting than the last. And each time made me love arguments even more.
After this experience, I became hooked to arguments and debates (the ones situated away from a podium of any sort). Every time there was a discussion about a topic I knew in my home or in school, I would immediatly jump in.And even if I didn't posess enough knowledge to actively participate, I always stuck around to listen. For me, nothing says intellectual engagement than a good old-fashioned debate
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Having been brought up rather traditionally with Islam playing an important role in my upbringing, my faith in my beliefs was unshakable. However, in O2 (10th grade)I would just say 2002 here, no need for the 10th grade specification I had an English teacher who had very strong opinions about how religon had to be kept away from the government in order for the government to be successful, and he was very vocal about his views in class. His opinions sparked rather heated arguments between him and his class, with his students mostly trying to prove his views wrong.
After this experience, I became hooked to arguments and debates (the ones situated away from a podium of any sort). Every time there was a discussion about a topic I knew in my home or in school, I would immediatly jump in.
It's good. Specific and it answers the prompt, just a few grammatical suggestions.