Undergraduate / Be an all-rounder mediaman--statement for Master of Communication and New Media [3]

Please confine your statement to no more than 300 words.

The content of your statement should explain why you wish to study the programme and how the qualification is relevant to your career aspirations, as well as your expectation of the programme.

My working experience from television, internet and newspaper made me more clearly about my career aspiration: to be an all-rounder mediaman both in theory and skills. The most important reasons for choosing MACNM are such curriculums were first provided in your department in HongKong and this program can lead to application in an online, interactive and multimedia format, which are my career interests.

During my undergraduate study, I achieved 82/100 for total GPA, 85/100 for major GPA. My performance won me the second-class scholarship as well as Outstanding Graduate Award. In addition to my academic endeavors, I have successively held the posts of journalist, executive producer and Operations Officer in "Media Viewpoint Studio" of SWU, where my leadership and teamwork ability got promoted.

I started my internship at Hunan TV, where I worked as an assistant director and my scheme was adopted and applied into the program. Subsequently, I worked in website of Hunan TV, where I went to the spot of Ping Pang Carnival 2008 and took responsibility on live Internet broadcasts. My graduation thesis "Under the background of new media era" station and network interaction" patterns and trends - A Case Study of hunantv" combined the two internships. In September of 2009, I received an offer from China Tourism News, where I accomplished news reports included explanatory reporting, critical-coverage and photographs as well as take responsibility of editing the Shandong Tourism News Online.

My job covered almost all the costumer media which reshape me into a mature and realistic media man. It is quite convincible that my adequate work experiences can make me get well-prepared for the new media market. I am eagerly looking forward to studying at your department. With your guidance, I will play a better role in China new media industry.

Questions:
1: Is there any grammar mistakes above?
2: Does this statement answered the questions required properly?
Thanks for your help with deep appreciation.