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hachillies

Feb 12, 2011

Writing Feedback / The movie "Troy", Achilles - someone you admire. How have they affected your life? [6]

Hi Susan and ajit,

As I mentioned, my vocabulary is poor now. In fact, I can't express all my ideas perfectly. Thank you for your help. I'm studying hard. I'll make another in the future, and you will be the very first people who I will give it to.

Sincerely yours,

hachillies

Feb 4, 2011

Student Talk / Hi everyone! Welcome at EssayForum thread. [414]

Hi all,

My name is Hai. I come from Vietnam. I can find some Vietnamese members here. That is great. I just joined this forum yesterday because I need help for my essay. But then I feel that this forum is fantastic. It's a playground for people who wants to help and who needs helps about English.

I have been in USA for 2 months. My dream is to become a great business administrator so that I really want to work hard on English. Hope to work well with you guys. And I wish that all the members in this forum will become great English essay wirters.

hachillies

Feb 4, 2011

Student Talk / I'm weak in English, unable to write any composition. What to do? [31]

I know that learning another language is not easy. I had the same problem, too. Now, I cannot express exactly and fully what I really want to say in English. So I learned one experience, which I'm using. You have to realize that even in your native language; there are a lot of words that you don't know. You have to treat new English words as the way you treat your native language new words. Stop trying to find out what their means in your language. Try to use English to describe vocabularies. That will help you to remember and extend your vocabulary. Then you can go online to read essays, newspapers to improve your reading skill. Watching English Programs on TV helps you improve your listening. If you can read and listen well, it's not difficult for you to write. Remember, vocabulary is the most important when you learn English. You don't have to struggle practicing your English without a dictionary.

@ Trang: I can tell that you are Vietnamese. Nice to meet you. I don't have a paltalk account. Do you want to chat on another messenger?

hachillies

Feb 4, 2011

Writing Feedback / The movie "Troy", Achilles - someone you admire. How have they affected your life? [6]

Hi Puchina,

Thanks for your comment. I have to send my journal today. So I don't have enough time to make a good change unless I want to have some mistakes. :D.

As my vocabulary is limited, so that I could not make a good explaination in the second part. But I'm on my way improving my English skill and I hope to have your many helps in the future. Joining this forum was my good decision.

Hachillies.

hachillies

Feb 3, 2011

Writing Feedback / The movie "Troy", Achilles - someone you admire. How have they affected your life? [6]

Hi essayforum.com,

I am working on a journal that is given by my English teacher. I was looking for help on google and I found your web site. I found a thread with the same subject about "describe someone you admire", but my journal has an extra part which i have to tell how he/she has affected my life. Could you please check my journal? In fact, I don't know what should I call it, journal or essay.

I want to talk about a character in the movie "Troy", his name is Achilles.
He was the best in his country. He was brave, strong and ambitious. But he was modest. He was so strong in his fights. He was like a lion in every war. He was the great leader whom all the army depent on. But he had a warm heart of true love. He had the courage to sacrifice everything for the woman he loved. What I like most about him is his enthusiasm for his own will. He wanted his name to be legend and he did it.

I choose my nick name Hachillies, the combination of Achilles and my name. I found something I would want to be in him. I changed a lot from that. I restrain myself from weakness. I set the goal of my life to be a good leader in economic. I know that it would be hard. But I want to be like Achilles.

Thank you for help.