Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2: Developed nation should tackle refugee problem [8]

i am hafsa and i am really grateful to you for your suggestion

i am your junior and your respect is due for me...you have written a best essay....no doubt....but when i think on the topic....it really seems to me that refugee problem for undeveloped countries is largely ignored by developed ones...this world is highly selfish...and the truth is...they damn care...may i know....do you think so?

Undergraduate / "unusual to see a soldier contribute to his nation" Commonapp essay to Ivys [14]

hello leonard,

first i want to know that for what purpose are you thinking for a title...well its tricky enough...did you write it yourself...its got MORE THAN HUNDRED TITLES....isn't it?

Grammar, Usage / help and tips in improving writing techniques [13]

thanks for suggestions...due respect

but i need to mention that i am an o level student...my first paper is this year 9th may...english language....how can i do my best within a month....at least my standards can only approve an A*....i need straight A*s