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Posts by selam19
Joined: Apr 11, 2011
Last Post: Oct 7, 2011
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selam19   
Oct 7, 2011
Writing Feedback / My family - relationships with dad, grandma, aunt. [6]

Description of my best friend Nasnet
I met nasnet in Amierca when I was 13 year old. Our birthdays are very close, just 3 month a part. We met at school when I was 7 grade and we were neigbors so I see her often. Nasnet is small, skinny and quite person espcially with new peoples and she is very shy. She is quite beautiful, espcially when her smiles.she has brown eyes and a big mouth, she has short black hair, she always uses spray and I don't like spray, so when she hung out with me she don't used. we have nearly the same hobbies like she like to play vollyball and saccor, and sometimes the same opinions at school or at home everywhere.She always bring out best thing to me and I love her when she dose because I agree with her.She is like my family and I trust her as much as I trust my self and my family. She always telling me if something wrong with her or with school because she trust me as I trust her. The good thing is we keep our pravit to our self we never tell to other people or our friends.
selam19   
May 16, 2011
Undergraduate / How have your past experiences influenced your academic record? [2]

can someone help me with those questions I don't know where to starts

1)How have your past experiences influenced your academic record?
2) What are you doing presently to ensure your academic success?
3) What are your academic goals and how will CWU help you accomplish these goals?
Your essay should include information regarding your gpa, test scores, or high school core deficiencies and your involvement in leadership contributions, if any, in your home, school, or community.
selam19   
Apr 15, 2011
Writing Feedback / My family - relationships with dad, grandma, aunt. [6]

without grandma

When I was l little I grow up with my greandma. I wish she is alive and i can live with her , she is sweet and wonderful mam.I had a drem very vivid dream, one that I shall never forget. Even though, it's been almost 20 years, I still remember it feels like it was yestrday. The dream was about my grandmother.

My greandma and I were very close each other,because when my mother left me with my dad and dad can't help me with ever thing because my dad want to move differnt coutry to work and help me and my grandma it means dad said. Wherever grandma went I was right by her side just like a puppy on a dog leash.

when I was 5 or 6 my greadma died, I miss her. After a while I have moved with my aunt because no one helping me at home. When I was with my aunt I wasn't that comfortable. Actually my aunt is very nice and specially her husband is very nice and he help me alot about school and how to mange yourself. when I was 16 i move to kenya and when i was 17 i move to USA. Now I'm tring to go EWU.

Thanks every one
can some one help me with this eassy
I'm not that good writing eassy
selam19   
Apr 11, 2011
Letters / Leadership, Knowledge, Adversity, Service, Challenge, Goals - insight resume [5]

I was wondering if you guys could help me with this if its okay and please tell me what do you think about it?

1.Leadership/Group Contribution: Describe examples of your leadership experience in which you have significantly influenced other, helped resolve disputes, or contributed to group effforts over time. Consider responsibilities to initiatives taken in or out of school.

One of my most experiences has been done for the young people in the United State. When i was in High School I voluntary for the young people to clean thier garedan for three hour and raising money for babies. The other one is I sending some foods for united state soldier in Afghanistan.We developed programs that taught leadership.

2. Knowledge in a field/creativity: Describe any of your special interests and how you have developed knowledge in these areas. Give examples of your creativity: the ability to see alternatives; take diverse perspectives; come up with many, varied, or original ideas; or willingness to try new things.

My biggest area of interests has always been science or mixing chemicals to see reactions, I have always found science to be fascinating. Because I always deram to be Radiologist Technician so i have a deram to study science or mixing chemicals. I like to see how and why things work starting from the small things like cells to the larger things like planets.

3) Dealing with adversity: Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to address this challenge. Include whether you turned to anyone in facing that challenge, the role that person played, and what you learned about yourself.

One of the bigger challenges in my life is living without parents in United States. It's really hard living without parents because you can't ask whatever you want. It doesn't sound right but when I was 13 my dad passed and I don't have any information about my mam I grow up with my grand ma. After my grand ma passed I move to United States to live with my uncle it was difficult to live in USA because they speak different. English is my second language. Now am good with my language.

4) Community service: Explain what you have done to make your community a better place to live. Give examples of specific projects in which you have been involved in over time.

I have always enjoyed community service, especially with choir group in our church. My first volunteering was at church teaching different church song for the kid I been enjoyed with them .it makes me glad when the kids song load and respect their parents.

5) Handling systemic challenges: Describe your experiences facing or witnessing discrimination. Tell us how you responded and what you learned from those experiences and how they prepared you to contribute to the EWU community.

As a Christian student transferring from a private to public school I faced some cruel religious discrimination. At this time I was young and didn't understand why people were being so harsh about my personal beliefs. This confuses and made me feel very awful about myself. As I grown up and have continued to face religious but have learned to believe in myself more and not to let other poples to make you believes.

6) Goals/task commitment: Articulate the goals you have established for yourself and your efforts to accomplish them. Give at least one specific example that demonstrates your work ethic/diligence

My biggest goal that I have for myself is that I want to become radiologist technician. I decided that when I was in ten grades and I do not expect to change my goals may be after four Universities. I plan to attend a four year university. I always had a dream to graduate University not in college.
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