Writing Feedback / "My grown up Christmas list" song [8]

hello.I practice writing and I should notice you It is just practice if you don't mind.and also i add that i have not high education.

I don't know why I choosehave chosen the song "My grown up Christmas List" to listen now.

I hop that you forgive me!!!!!!!!!!

Student Talk / succeed in IBM 000-M86 exam [5]

dancychan
Hello. First of all I am sorry to bothering you. I have a question? What is this exam and every Student should pass it to go to next step? If you have time could you please explain it? I have no information about Canad education program. I think this Exam should be after University?

Writing Feedback / Goodbye AIDS? HIV-AIDS is an irremediable disease no more. [8]

Thank you "EF_Kevin" for your advises that I will use them.


I do not know how to change it? Bellow, I rewrite essay in the way that you and" EF_Kevin" help me to rectified it. By the way could you tell me about making paragraph .did i do it wright?

Goodbye AIDS?

Has the time arrived for us to stop thinking about HIV-AIDS as an irremediable disease? Or should we abandon this wish in the dreamland?

Newly, scientists have had an up-to-date idea to heal HIV-positive people like Timothy Ray Brown. Brown, who is an American HIV-positive and had a recurrence of leukemia, has been remedied by an unparalleled kind of bone marrow graft from a donor which his medic, Gero Huetter had proposed for him in 2007 when his condition was getting worse. Today his doctor said that he probably will never have a problem with HIV.

At present, scientists have difficulty proving this idea(Brown case). (I first write here next sentence)Now, The question is how many percentage with what costs is likely to be successful regarding this cure, finding donors with a precise fit--which should be find in the small ratio of people-- is arduous? (refereed to Special reports by Kate Kalland: An end to AIDS- Reuters Wed,1Jun,2011)

Now could you please tell me about new change?

Writing Feedback / Goodbye AIDS? HIV-AIDS is an irremediable disease no more. [8]

Dear Ajit Rai, Thank you very much.I will try to have those books that you did mention.

Writing Feedback / Goodbye AIDS? HIV-AIDS is an irremediable disease no more. [8]

Dear Annika Liana thank you for your response which is a big encouraging to me.You know I study by myself without no one to tell me that, Why my writing is wrong or wright? Thank you so much and with more writing I will accept your support.By the way I change it in my document.