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Posts by shanbalook
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shanbalook   
Jul 14, 2011
Writing Feedback / TOELF-should children play computer games [5]

It is take a lot to understand the main idea of youe essay, as I know your theises statment should be clear and come at first or second sentence not at the end of first paragraph. Also as I know all of your main reasons should de mentiond in the first paragragh. I can say a good english has been used but it is not well organized.
shanbalook   
Jul 14, 2011
Writing Feedback / TOEFL: do you agree that technology helps students learn more and faster? [4]

Although some people oppose technology helps student to learn more and quick I fully agree with it. Forms of technology like computers and internet made the information more accessible and available in different forms. Also by using the technology learning proccess can be more interesting for students.

Student can find huge amount of relted information and material by a simple search. No matter what topic they are interested, there are unbelevable resourses available on the net. It is enough to enter a keyword to search engines like google to have all the necessary information.

In addition using technology can help student to learn in their own suitable way. Every student has different preferences for learning. Some learn better by reading, some learn better by lisening and some learn better by visualizing. Now a days it is possible for teachers to provide student with sutable materials in different formats. They are no longer limmited to the text books.

More than all, computers and internet can prepare an interactive learning that is much more interesting. There are lots of softwares thet helps teachers to make the classes more fun. students can learn during playing by thhe software, they can have some competitions, they can helps out each other to learn better. And all of these are possible with a really cheap way.

I believe that correct and productive using of technology can defenetley conteribute to a better learning.
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