Writing Feedback / TOEFL; Is it a good thing to move to a new city or new country? [2]

this is my essay~~thanks for any comment.

It is commonly accepted that fixed relationships with other people is beneficial to most people's life. People need long-term friends to share their happiness or pain, to help them survive the tough moments and to give their advice when trapped in trouble. So people should just live in one place without moving out. From my perspective, sometimes it is a good thing to move to a new city or a new country especially for young people for the following reasons.

First and foremost, moving to a new city or new country means a new chance for many young people. For example, many college students are eager to go abroad to further their education after their college or middle school life in their native nation. In this time, most students and other young people are just fighting for their dreams, and they can still keep in touch with their old friends in terms of nowadays highly developed communication techniques. In a word, it is a good thing for people who try their best to obtain a better education or occupation in a new place.

Secondly, as human beings, we have the original desire for exploring new things or new areas. Always living in one place will make us bored with our fixed relationships, unchanged daily affairs and immovable sceneries. Sometimes, we need to just go out into another new places, to open our minds, broaden our horizons, and to involve in a new relationship with other people. We may make new friends in the new places, which will be a unforgettable and interesting experience. It's highly possible that we would live a utterly new life in a new city or a new country.

Thirdly, sometimes losing our old friends is not a bad thing. In our life, we always make friends and lose friends except for few lifelong friends. We cannot change other people's ideas, we cannot let other people stay for us. Friends themselves are changing, and we should change as well. Mostly important, true friendship won't be terminated because of the geographical barriers. When we are still young, we should keep moving on and receiving new things, in that way, we can always catch up the pace of the world and learn the newest knowledge in the history of human beings. Losing old friends will not only make us have new friends, but also make us reflect on ourselves and improve ourselves.

In a nutshell, it is often a good thing to move to a new city or a new country, because of better education quality, new experience, and new life.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL. WHEN DISCUSSING CONTROVERSIAL PROBLEMS, TELEPHONE OR TEXT MESSAGING. [3]

According to my daily experience, people with different characteristics will use different ways to discuss upsetting or controversial problems. Of course, everyone has his or her own golden rule. From my perspective, I would choose to use e-mail/test messaging to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others for the following reasons.

On the one hand, I am so sensitive a person that I would be affected by any subtle facial expression and other nonverbal behave, which I would interpret and attach to some meaningful things. It is highly likely that any emotional feelings would mislead the talkers who are discussing upsetting or controversial problems, which may result in some worse things, such as deepening the misunderstanding or making the problems more upsetting, adding more problems and befuddlement to the problem. Nevertheless, using e-mail/test messaging will circumvent these questions well, when a people writing their opinions and arguments involved with an upsetting or controversial problem, he/she can concentrate on the problem , be sensible to the words and try their best to clear their opinions and avoid unnecessary misinterpretations.

On the another hand, using e-mail/test messaging would be more efficient, especially when it comes to some upsetting or controversial issues. Using e-mail/test messaging, we can be more sensitive to the postscript content, which would bring us less negligence and improve the efficiency of solving these upsetting or controversial problems. When people are talking, they would mostly ignore many details and only have some general ideas or opinions, which would leave much important information which may be the key to the problem-solving; while when writing, people would pay much more attention to the details, and refer to much resource to improve their ideas, rather than just speak out without much consideration. However, if you write, things would be much different, less negligence, less confusions, and more chances of solving the problems.

In the nutshell, when discussing some upsetting or controversial problems, I would use e-mail/test messaging rather than telephone/voice-messaging because of its resulting in clearer presentation and higher efficiency.