Writing Feedback / Technology makes our life to be more convenient and colorful, brings lots of benefits to children [4]

Technology is used for improving our life not destorying them. How some people may concern about it has made children less creative than they were in the past. Actually, it provide a better way for them to communicate with others and exchange their precious ideas.

The most popular and widely technology we used today is computer.Even though there is no doubt that computer has some disadvantages towards children, but it stil has more benefits than its harm. Therefore, it apparently seems that the importance for parents to teach their children how to make good use of computers. As using the searching engine google and wikipeid, it can lead them to the information they need in no time and considerably broaden their horizon. As a result, making good use of the technology can inspire the children to be more creative.

Part of the reason that we are highly developed today is because that we can share our ideas easily than we used to be. Compared with hundreds years ago when we didn't have any electricity or telephone, even with talented children who have lots of ideas, they had to write to their teacher or friends by mail which took longer time than we use the modern technology to text or call them. Thus the technology brings an efficient and convenient way for children to become more creative.

Apart from above, technology changes the teaching method. We can not only studying at home freely by the website which contains lots of videos about different courses, but also exchange our ideas or find out problems when we met during the studying.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that technology makes our life to be more convenient and colorful. As well as it brings lots of benefits to children to be more creative than we were in the past.

Wish you guys give me some good ideas :)

Writing Feedback / Books have a greater impact on society than TV ( Toefl essay) [2]

Nowadays as the development of technology, TV plays an important role of society. It can help people widely spread their thoughts and tells people the news happened all around world. However, I still hold the view that books have a greater impact on society than TV. And there are several reasons to back up my perspectives.

Firstly, when we read the book, we will have enough time to think about the view that author holds and think even further. So that we can easily understand the meaning and remember it

Take my personal experience for instance: when I read the book about a professional concept and I feel confused, I will go to the library to borrow some other books or search on the internet to figure out the problem I met and then take notes, in this way, I can understand it clearly. Instead of hearing the news from TV, I can have more space to think about it and go further to the knowledge.

Secondly, sometimes what we heard from TV is just from one side, so our "eyes" probably will be blinded by the false information. People have different angles and hold different views, so when heard the news from TV, we will be easily convinced by the speaker. But we when read books, we can search several books and compare with each of them then we can get right information.

Thirdly, book goes further than TV. Even until today, we can still find books from hundreds of years ago. Books can be saved well. But after few decades, people will think that TV is a kind of old fashion stuff, therefore it will be damaged instead of keeping it well thus our offspring can't get to know about the life we live now.

In summary, as the books have a greater impact on society, the government should encourage people to write books. The government should also take care about the public service to let people have chance to read books as many as they want to in the public library. In this way, I am strongly believed that our society will getting better

PS. This is my first time to write an essay online, hope you can give some advices. Thanks :)