Writing Feedback / "the young boy with a lady" - Dreams (narrative) [6]

I really love the ending. ! Awesome job i enjoyed reading this. ! (:

Poetry / On a Camp ('I saw you from the distance') [6]

I honestly think this is an aswesome poem. &yeah i think that person you are writing it for will like it. (:

Essays / How to start an admission essay about myself? [67]

Thank you for your help. ! (:
I will try my best on helping both of you. (:

Essays / How to start an admission essay about myself? [67]

'personal information' - What should i write about and how should i start this essay?

There may be persol information you want considered as part of your admissions application. Write an essay describing that informstion. You might include exeptional hardships, challenges, or opportunties that have shaped or impacted your ablilities or academic creentials, personal respolsibilities, exceptional achievements or talents, educational goals, or ways in which you might contribute to an institution commited to creating a diverse learning environment.

Can anybody help me with this essay because honestly i don't have an idea on how to start and what to wite about.
-Thanks! (:
Angela.

Poetry / On a Camp ('I saw you from the distance') [6]

I would love to help. But what exactly do you wish for me to do?