Writing Feedback / The amount of leisure time of working men and women - IELTS graph [3]

1) compared to
NOT compared with

Look at this: studyhorror.com/questions/difference-between-compare-to-and-compare-with/23

2)women have the recreation time less than men reflecting => women have the recreation time less than men do which reflects

Writing Feedback / Writing ielts task 1_ Diagram: The water cycle [4]

yes i also agree that you should use the diagram below or above or whatever since in your answer, the people who are going to mark it will not see the diagram below like that. :) Cheers!