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Posts by samba
Joined: Sep 22, 2011
Last Post: Jan 17, 2012
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samba   
Jan 17, 2012
Scholarship / (graduated from the Department for International) motivation letter for a scholarship [5]

ŮŽ There are some grammatical errors you have to be careful about them. It will be better to help from english teacher. it is good in general, i like the information in your essay, i would help you to correct your essay as much as i can.

" I hope to use the knowledge practically to assist with progressing in my country." I supposed this will be better.
samba   
Jan 14, 2012
Writing Feedback / Job security or job satisfaction? Which is better? [2]

Which one is important "job satisfaction or job security"?

These days, finding appropriate job opportunity for young generation in most of the countries in all over the world is one of the controversial matters which it limits alternative selection for them to choose between favorable careers or secure job. I would argue about occupation and the effects on people's life.

It is obvious that satisfaction in every person life is one of the matters which increase eagerness to continue life. Those who don't enjoy their life cannot be happy or successful and even sometimes can cause depression. One of the factors which influence on people's life quality is job. Every person prefers an ideal job which has good co-workers, good salary, high social level, appropriate time schedule, concern to university major which is not possible in all situations. People must tolerate their bosses and co-workers for years since they have no choice or they are not enough confident to change their jobs. Sometimes people cannot earn their desire money maybe because they are in a wrong way or their profession is not related to their inner talents.

Although this trend has some benefits, from my personal view point, job security can play main role in future life. Those who don't care to their occupation can tolerate risky situations and they personally are indifference and prefer adventure in life. Actually it depends on personal characters to follow satisfaction or security in his or her professional life.

In conclusion, as I mentioned before, it depends on personal character to choose pleasure or security regarding to their occupations. Although, in my opinion pleasure and satisfaction is more important rather than money since future is vague and it is not rational to ruin present for future.
samba   
Jan 14, 2012
Scholarship / (graduated from the Department for International) motivation letter for a scholarship [5]

I have graduated with a major in Philology/Linguistics from International Relations Department at ZZZ University in 2011.
During my studies at college, I took number of courses...
Since my bachelor degree programme was based on
such a "need adj" practice
For instance,
Was held in Eindhoven...
During this event I attended numerous lectures which were presented by
and it also took part in Model United Nations
It was Such a multicultural environment which was a great place to trade opinions with overseas students...
samba   
Jan 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / Over eating can be as harmful as smoking? [7]

Tnx alot for your comments, do you have any sugesstion for beggining sentence?i mean sth interesting.actually for ielts exam 250 words is enough.am i right?moreover i supposed it should not be more than 250 words.
samba   
Jan 10, 2012
Writing Feedback / Over eating can be as harmful as smoking? [7]

Research has shown that over eating can be as harmful as smoking. Therefore, some people reckon the advertising some kinds of food products should be banned. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, the effects of advertising on inspiring people to purchase items which are either needless or harmful are not deniable. Although the influence of smoking on human's health can be controversial in compare to eating junk food or fast food. I don't agree with the impact of ads on promoting bad diet among people which I will discuss in the following text.

First of all, it's not logical to compare smoking to over eating. Obesity can be retrieved by some methods and surgeries. Regarding to improve technology the ways to assist people to loose weight become more convenient, On the other hand smoking is the reason of so many disease like lung cancer, heart attack, blood pressure which are deadly. In addition to no heal way can consider recovering them.

Second of all, whatever the human eat, can be useful for the body, just the crucial matter is the amount of eating which is concern to people. According to scientific research some junk food which was recognized as non-neutrinos food can be useful for body and bones. Finally, ads is one of the most rapidly growing areas which most of the companies take advantages of that to present their items and products which is not fair to omit.

In conclusion, the governments have a responsibility to avoid misleading ads on TV and billboards. Moreover it is good to concentrate on increasing public health by allocating budget for schools to teach the students to choose appropriate diet.
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