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hcdaniel93   
Sep 29, 2011
Undergraduate / 'No problem refusing drugs' (significant experience) Common App [3]

Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.

I live in San Jose and when I moved here in sixth grade, I could feel a warm, educational,
and safe learning envivornment. I was oblivious to the corruption around me. I was a naïve
middle schooler not suspecting that the people around me use or have been exposed to drugs.
But as I grew up I started noticing things. I noticed many students coming to school with blood
shot eyes and a sway in their step. I noticed kids bringing brownies and other baked goods that
those kids normally would not bother baking. I realized then that my school was full of drug
addicts and alcaholics. Originally I have witnessed some students smoking openly in the park
but there never were many students. Now I see that a vast majority of students use or have
been offered drugs. I have been recently offered drugs such as beer and chewing tobbaco, but
unlike many curious highschoolers, I was quick to refuse. Because of my lack of experience with
drugs, I had no interest in trying them. These offers to do drugs and my refusal to do them
showed me that it was good that I had grown up not exposed and oblivious to drugs. This led to
my lack of inerest in drugs and I realize that drugs will not be an issue in the future. If I am able
to refuse drugs as a highschooler, when I am at the peak of my curiosity, I will definatly not
have a problem refusing drugs when I am older and more responsible.
hcdaniel93   
Sep 29, 2011
Undergraduate / "Challenge of a Clown" - Rutgers Undergraduate Essay [3]

"Life's challenges are not supposed to paralyze you; They're supposed to help you discover who you are" - Bernice Reagon
As an eighteen years old student who came to America at age of 13, I had a time when I had to adjust to a completely different culture and accept completely different groups of people. In my motherland Korea, I was an outgoing student who was not afraid to volunteer first, to approach problems, and to help friends those are in need. I remember when I first came to America so vividly. I was a boy who could not speak English, had no friends, and was afraid to get to know anyone. I thought I would never be able to become a part of the American society and achieve the goals I have set for my future. However, one year after my arrival, I have found myself studying, trying with persistency to catch up to my fellow friends.

By second year, I have completed the ESL program and entered regular English course.

I hope this helps
hcdaniel93   
Sep 26, 2011
Undergraduate / 'I started quizzing' - This is my extracurricular statement [3]

Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum).

I started quizzing during my sophomore year. Anyone in middle school or high school is eligible for the quiz team. When I started, I fell behind during the first two months because of SAT's. This put me at a disadvantage, and I was clearly a handicap to my team. Kids in sixth grade were doing far better than me because I was not able to catch up. I did not let this bother me, and the next year I was able to prioritize and I was prepared for every quiz. I brought my team through the district division and the regional division. I myself moved up to the national division and won first place team. Now, all the younger kids look up to me not only as a great quizzer, but also a persevering man.
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