Writing Feedback / working experience;Every student should travel or work being going to university [3]

Hi all, Please help.. Here is the question.

Do you agree or disagree every student should travel or work for a year being going to university or college. Support your argument using examples and reasons.

Higher education is very important for all people nowadays. It is the modal for someone's future. By studying in a university or a college, someone can get higher knowledge that they haven't received it before. In addition, a degree is a requirement for somebody to get better position in a company. Some people believe that students should travel or work for a year while they are being going to the university or college. In my opinion, I totally agree with it.

First of all, working while studying can give a lots of benefits to the students. They can get both knowledge from the books and also experience from practical life. Experience is the most important thing. If students only study from the books, they only get a narrow knowledge. They should use the their knowledge in the real practice. Lets say it in my experience. While I was studying my bachelor degree in a college, I was also working in a company. I felt very tired at that time. But by doing the same thing in one time, it made me easier to understand what I was studying. By practicing it directly, I could remember the knowledge that my lecturers had thought me.

Furthermore, if students want to continue their study to master degree, some universities or colleges will require working experience. Without any working experience, they will reject their applications. For example, my friend is not accepted in one of the state universities in Medan because he never works before. He should work at least two years. It is the prerequisite to enter a graduate schools.

Traveling while studying is the best thing to refresh students' mind. After being stress with the examinations and assignments, students may go traveling to relax themselves. Students also need some entertainments in their life. By having such fun activities, their mind will become refresh again, will able to accept new knowledge, and will not feel depressed. It is very dangerous if a student feels depress.

In conculsion, to get better future, the most important thing is by getting the experience. After have it, you can continue to master degree. And the last thing is that do not too stress with your study. It is dangerous!

Writing Feedback / 'An adventure to me' the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country? [3]

Hello, I'm a newbie here. Please help my essay.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country? Give illustration and reasons to develop your ideas.

Who doesn't want to Live in a foreign country? I assert that everybody dreams it. Living in another country is a challenge for everybody, even tough it is for business purpose, vacation, study, or other reasons. So, what are the positive and negative impact?

As far as I concerned, the first advantage staying in a foreign country is that people can make a lot of friends. Once you land your foot at that place, you will have a new atmosphere. Everybody that you see and meet is unfamiliar for you. In my experience, when I had my vacation to Singapore, I have made a lot of fellows because I meet a lot of new people there. The second advantage is the chance to improve your language. Socializing can enhance your knowledge. For example, Tuti, my best friend, who is studying in Canada. Firstly, she doesn't have good English knowledge and pronounciation. But after studying there for two years, her English is improving fastly. Except that, people can learn cultures from locals. Each country has various culture. For example, I have a friend who came from England to Indonesia, my country. He told me that he have learned many things after his visit to Indonesia.

Except the advantages that we can get, there are also have the disadvantages. People need to spend a lot of money especially for living place. The cost of living can be higher because you need to pay for staying in an apartment or in boarding house. For example, my father spend a lot of Ringgits when he visited Malaysia, because he was staying at a hotel. But, It will be lucky if you have any relative that you know and you can stay in their house. Another disadvantage is a person need to take care everything by oneself especially for health.

To sum up, staying in foreign country is like an adventure for me, even though there are some disadvantages that I don't like. So, when I to staying in overseas, all that I must think about is all the advantages. Staying in a new place is interesting right? Just try it!