754changsteph
Oct 28, 2011
Undergraduate / 'After I got the rejection letter' - Stanford re-applicants Essay [2]
I think that maybe you should shorten the beginning a bit...talk about your devastation, but maybe don't dwell so much on the past; transition more into the future and explain what and how your experiences have changed you. Great writing, though!
I think that maybe you should shorten the beginning a bit...talk about your devastation, but maybe don't dwell so much on the past; transition more into the future and explain what and how your experiences have changed you. Great writing, though!