Writing Feedback / Government has announced that it wishes to build a military base near your community [3]

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Your government has announced that it wishes to build a military base near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the military base?

Military are the persons who protect our country from foreign force for the peace and prosperity , I must support them and it is great opportunity for my community to be with them.Every things has merit and demerit, that is natural and this is also applies to military base. I strongly support building the military base in my community.

Security, infrastructure development, and increase business of my society , are the most important advantages of military base which may change the face of my society. Having military base in my community helps to reduce all security related problems such as robbery,smuglaring, vandaliging as elements causing this problems become aware with security. Furthermore, for military base, government builds some infracture such as roads,water tapes, electrical and , communicational infrastructures and from them, my community is benefited.Likewise,infrastructure development along with daily living needs for army , increses the business of my society. For instance, my neighbour village, there is one army bareck and after it establishment on this village, a good road had built.Likewise, people are using the water tapes which was made by this bareck.

However, with the advant of military base, my society will face some problems such as presence of mine around security base may create psychological fear of explosion . Likewise, loud noise coming form guns, and bunkers may also disturbs my community.But, I confidently say that, infront of advantage of military base, the disadvantage is insignificant.So, I am highly optimistic for establishing military base in my society.

To sum up,inspite of some disadvantage, it is my resposibility to co-operate with person who shed the blood for the sake of society .It is canny to mitigate the problems associated with military base and contibute for development of a country.

Writing Feedback / Money for students sports vs library activies [5]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Students are not fixed vessel to be filled with bookish knowledge rather they are person deserving for participation in field other than reading books such as involving in sports. I advocate for equal investment of money by university in libraries and sports' activities since sports help to maintain good mental as well as physical health and sports are integral part of curriculum.

Firstly, sports are very beneficial for studying students because it provides great chance to amuse themselves. As a result students forget their stress of study and other daily life problems which are hindrance on effective learning. Playing game also boosts our physical health .It is said that healthy body is healthy mind. For instance, in Nepal, one research shown that learning process is effective in sport students than non sport students.

Secondly, sports are also vital part of curriculum and just enhancing reading facilities, the whole academic programme becomes disabled since learning from reading books and sports are two sides of a single coin. That sprit can be only fulfilled by investing equal amount of money on libraries and sports. For example, in my university, equal amount of money has allocated to enhance two fields and the academic achievement has been increasing since equal emphasis.

Some people argue for more emphasis on libraries than sport since they do not know mutual relation of book learning and sport.

To sum up, libraries and sports are two equally important part of the most of curriculum and attempting to get good result without considering this fact is unwise.

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