Undergraduate / 'Live Borderless' - Why UChicago? [4]

Colleges don't like to see other colleges names in the essays. I suggest you take it out and just say you saw the uchicago rep

Undergraduate / Weird Quiet Girl- admissions [4]

I like it! but i think you should take out the word weird. it gives a negative feeling to the essay at that point

Undergraduate / 'My Dad's Illness Gave Me Inspiration' - UC Prompt #1 [25]

it is kind of cliche