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news editors; country condition, citizens education, living condition; influence [5]
Nowadays, newspapers and television are very important means of communication, so news editors have significant responsibility. They decide what to broadcast on television and
print in newspapers.
In my opinion, There are three factors which influence these decisions.
The first factor is
the condition of country.
I think,If the condition is poor, they
should not announce bad news. For example, when a country
prepares for war, the editors
should avoid funny news. Actually, they should share about effects of war, result of war, etc
.In turn warn citizens against war.
The second factor is
the level of citizens
' education. If education level is low in a country, these people
do not understand academic news. Editors should use unsophisticated language for citizens. If there are many villager in
a country, editors can broadcast and print about agriculture and livestock raising. Citizens are
generally more interested in their own lives, so the news should specify according to
the level of citizens
' education.
The third factor is
the living condition. For example, in my country, rating
s measure according to income. Government
classify results: ab and total viewer which show social-economic condition, so commercial is given to television and newspaper by considering the raiting.Therefore , to earn money editors decide carefully who likes good news or not.
Consequently , there are three factor which influence editors' decisions. These are condition of country, level
s of citizens
' education and living condition
s .
These factors help editors
choose which news is better. However, some bad editors still decide themselves
without thinking
about these factors.
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