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Dec 15, 2011
Undergraduate / 'playing with legos' - Pratt Institute Architecture Essay [3]

December 25, 1999: the unofficial start to my career in architecture. I've seen the home movies from this day a million times, and every time I watch it I notice the same thing. It was one of the first presents I had opened, and it didn't seem to be anything special, just a tiny wrapped box with my name on it. I opened it up, and my face lit up immediately. This small gift was a box of Legos, but for me, it was the start of my life in architecture. This little box of building blocks was more important to me than any other present underneath the Christmas tree on that day and for many years to come.

For as far back as I can remember, I could always be found playing with legos. As a little kid I had no clue that these legos would be the key to my future, but looking back on those days, I now can understand why I am so interested in architecture. I would be in the playroom at all hours of the day, sitting on the floor with my bins full of legos, just building. I'd make houses, buildings, cars, towns, cities; you name it, and I'd built it. As a child nothing stands in your way of building whatever you want, you can be as creative as you want and in the end, you were always happy with your work. To this day, I love being able to experiment with different design techniques, in hopes of creating a new architectural style to add my name to the list of famous architects. As I grew up I can still remember having my friends over and spending days and nights just building with the legos. Without realizing it, I had submersed myself into a life of architecture from such a young age.

Still, to this day I can still (remove 1 of the still words) be found building and designing houses, buildings, and anything else under the sun. I am an avid member in many clubs at my school, and one such club is the yearbook club. It is my job as editor-in-chief to design the yearbook from cover to cover. This contributes to my architectural mind frame because I am using design principals to make the yearbook flow from page to page and to make it look beautiful, so people can cherish it throughout their lives. Another activity that I take part in at my school is building and designing the floats for my town's homecoming parade. Since my freshman year of high school, I have been involved in Odyssey of the Mind, which has allowed me to design scenery and props for performances on regional, state, and national levels. At the same time (replace by simultaneously or meantime) I have taken architecture classes at my high school, which have shown me that I am willing and excited to pursue a career in architecture. Architecture has always been a part of my life, but it hasn't been until recently that I have noticed and accepted it. With the help of Pratt Institute I know I will be able to go out into the world and contribute to the architecture community.

You can remove 1 or more sentences from your introduction about legos. Maybe the 1st sentence of paragraph two
kadampoo   
Dec 15, 2011
Dissertations / 'Advanced Networking' - Confusing to select M.Phil(cs) topic. [10]

The purpose of the thesis is to demonstrate your ability. Your thesis topic should be on some area that interests you. It should contain theoretical work as well as empirical results. Your study should address a problem. Selecting a topic is a systematic approach. Select something that you can work on within the time available to you. Choose something you have a passion towards as you will be devoting a lot of time and energy towards it. Ask your thesis guide for some ideas. Research on the net regarding unanswered areas related to wireless and security Look at previous dissertations to get an idea. All the best :)
kadampoo   
Dec 15, 2011
Graduate / 'Strong Academics' - Graduate SOP for Electrical Engineering [6]

Thank you so much for your suggestions. I will surely move the later half of the 1st paragraph to the end. Which paragraphs do you think are very descriptive which may not be required for the SOP? I would require all your help in improving my SOP. I find it considerably weak.
kadampoo   
Dec 15, 2011
Graduate / 'Strong Academics' - Graduate SOP for Electrical Engineering [6]

I was in 4th grade when I first looked through a kaleidoscope. Peering into the eye piece, I could see beautiful colours twirling inside the cylinder. The rich patterns enthralled me. It felt like magic in a tube. The kaleidoscope awakened a fascination for light in me. Little did I know that this childhood fascination would become my area of specialization. Pursuit of knowledge has always been the thrusting force behind all of my achievements. My decision to study beyond an undergraduate degree study springs from my ultimate objective of becoming a professor. I wish to pursue my Masters at XXX's Electrical and Computer Engineering graduate program with a specialisation in Applied Optics and Photonics because of the multitude of interesting research areas and quality of the academic program.

Academics have always been my strong-hold. From kindergarten to the tenth grade, I studied in XXXX graduating highest in my school. Inspired by how the advances in the field of communication had radically changed the modern world, I took up Electronics and Communication at XXX. During my undergraduate studies, I acquired a comprehensive knowledge of the diverse fields of electronics and its applications in communication. I was granted a 50% scholarship by All India Council for Technical Education (AICTE) for all four years as I was among the top 11% of the girls.

Academic setbacks have always propelled me to work harder in order to achieve excellent results. In the third semester, I found the subject Electromagnetic Waves very tough and failed to grasp even the most basic concepts. I, consequently, did very poorly in this subject. I can never forget the disappointment after looking at my grade card. However, this did not discourage me. I started this subject from scratch in my free time and obtained a clear understanding of the basics. Subsequently, I studied more subjects related to fields such as Antennas and Microwaves. I received good grades in both the subjects. Thus, electromagnetic fields became my area of interest. But the subject that fascinated me the most was Optical Fibre Communication. This subject has given me a comprehensive qualitative understanding of optical principles backed with the mathematics to quantify this understanding. I was one of the top students in this course, and I can confidently assert that I have turned my weakness into strength.

I have always adopted an analytical approach in order to attain an in-depth understanding of the subject and its concepts. I believe this is very much essential to pursue a career in academia. I have actively participated in various technical workshops such as PCB Design, Line Follower Robot, etc. to reinforce the theoretical knowledge I gained. I interned at Honeywell Technology Solutions, Bangalore during my summer vacation. I worked on their security device Armor100 to localise it to Hindi. The objective of this project was to support Hindi interface to empower the Indian users to make full use of all the facilities offered by the device. The major components included Atmega32L microcontroller, a dot-matrix LCD and a matrix keypad. Interfacing was done through the SPI port. The keypad provided text entry in Hindi, and the LCD displayed Hindi content with good resolution. This was my first industry exposure, and the successful completion of the project was a matter of immense pride to me. As a part of the curriculum, I undertook a project on a metro rail prototype. The core of the project was an 8051 microcontroller with LCD and Buzzer interfacing. The objective of this project was to emulate a driverless metro train. I completed another project in Digital Image processing which required me to implement segmentation algorithms to make an automatic vehicle number plate recognition software. I am an avid reader of a number of technical journals like Journal of Optics and Optics Letters. These publications being a repository of knowledge stimulate me to be better qualified for research and also keep me informed about the recent breakthroughs.

I have constantly endeavoured to involve myself in extracurricular activities. I spend my weekends at college volunteering with Voluntary Service Organisation (VSO). The VSO group visit orphanages and teach them to work with arts and crafts, and to dance. We also conduct cleaning campaigns and visit paediatric ward in the reputed XXX and entertain the sick children. Spending time with these kids made me realize that any contribution, no matter how small, is always appreciated. During my vacation, I volunteered with Lions Club over the period of three years. I have helped them organise blood donation camps, free eye surgery camps and also helped in creating mass awareness regarding eye donation. Community Work has taught me to be grateful for the everyday things that I often take for granted, and to strive for the things that I believe in. The experience and reward I have attained through work with the underprivileged, and with children in my community will allow me to contribute to similar programs in the XXX community.

I am greatly interested in the field of Near Field Optics and Nonlinear Optics. After completing my MS, I aim to continue my studies striving for a Doctoral degree as this will go a long way in preparing me to become a highly acclaimed professor. The cutting-edge research being undertaken in the research group Ultrafast and Nanoscale Optics Group under the guidance of Prof. XXX has fascinated me to a very great extent. This group best matches my research interests. XXX being among the best schools for Electrical Engineering would definitely provide me an academically stimulating environment along with top notch research facilities and infrastructure. Going through the graduate catalog for Masters in Electrical Engineering with a specialisation in Applied Optics and Photonics at XXX has left me impressed and substantiated my belief that your esteemed University is indeed the place to help me realize my goals. A career as an educator requires good communication skills, patience, the ability to think innovatively, hard work and strong motivation. I am confident that I possess these qualities, and that I will match the high standards set by XXX
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