Undergraduate / 'I saw Duke University in the top ten' - TRINITY SUPPLEMENTAL [6]

You are going to need some formatting help with this essay. You have really good examples of how Duke attracts you. Make sure that if the instructions given ask you to limit your response to one or more paragraphs, then don't go over two paragraphs.

Undergraduate / NYU Supplement - English Exchange experience in school [5]

I don't see any errors, just remember a college admissions essay should be around 250 words (4 paragraphs) and try to convey the message of who and what you are, how you write, etc. It looks good!