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abnk599   
Dec 24, 2011
Undergraduate / 'a huge fan of Terrence Malick' - NYU supplement essay 2000ch [2]

What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or place in the world (a film, book, performance, website, event, location, etc.), and explain its significance to you.

I am a huge fan of Terrence Malick and his work: classy and penetrating, deep and inspiring. I watched all of his movies and thoughts are running in my mind after every single screening. His films made me change my perceptions and get rid of various prejudices. If the real target of a filmmaker is to make viewers ponder over the lives and analyze decisions they are making, Malick is an absolute genius.

His last movie, Tree of Life is perhaps comparable only to Stanley Kubrick's 2001: A Space Odyssey in terms of its significance and importance. I felt so overwound attending a premiere, having that wonderful feeling I get every time I see a real piece of art. A magnificent and rare feeling, as art becomes uncommon and incomprehensible by the majority of adolescents nowadays . Merely looking at opening slow-motion shots made me get these goosebumps, when you feel enchanted and culturally shocked. I was even more shocked when I heard people laughing throughout the film and even leaving the cinema. I felt sad and simply disappointed, because almost none understood the movie and made it clear, that the find Malick ridiculous.

For me movie is a masterpiece and not mass production when I can find something unseen before when I watch it over. The Tree of Life is versatile and complex, but it remains real and as objective as it can be. I could not leave the screening without thinking about the regress in our society, but most of all it made me reconsider my meaning of life.
abnk599   
Dec 24, 2011
Undergraduate / 'serious about my flute playing' - Common App- prompt #1 [7]

Don't think you need a full stop before but here
The second half of my audition also went about as well as I could have hoped for with all the adrenaline pumping through my veins. But when I returned to the hall

I like the last paragraph, you shouldn't change it
So just cut first ones, they are too long
But your essay is really good!
abnk599   
Dec 24, 2011
Undergraduate / 'potential of the liberal' - Bates Supplement Response [3]

Applying to Bates as well.
Actually, I think you should write more about advantages of liberal arts colleges if applying to one, especially as an answer to the sentece you've chosen ;)
abnk599   
Dec 24, 2011
Undergraduate / 'a sweet tooth for the independent life' -Describe One Activity [10]

Grace Wei - Grace Kelly comparison is awesome. Nice essay. However I guess if you apply to Ivy Leage and stuff it is just not serious enough, I am not saying that it shouldn't be funny. Just say more about your attitude to the job, the fact that you needed it and took it seriously.
abnk599   
Dec 24, 2011
Undergraduate / 'In a large international company' - Why UChicago [2]

I am an international student, even though English is actually the language I usually speak. Nonetheless can you look at grammar as well?Thanks

Question 1. How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future? Please address with some specificity your own wishes and how they relate to UChicago.

To start with, I am thinking about doing a major in economics because I am equally interested in
mathematics, social sciences and languages. On the other hand, I have a wide range of hobbies and additional
interests, which I want to explore more while studying in the college. UChicago offers
a great selection of available courses, including many appealing minors. For instance, it gives a chance to take English & Creative Writing
course as a minor and it is exactly what I want as writing both fictional and not has been my hobby for
the most of my conscious life. Cinema and Media Studies is another area of studies which interests me
tremendously, even though I am not intending to pursue a career directly in that area. However the
main reason for me to apply to the University of Chicago is the fact that it offers Chicago Careers in
Journalism Program. I have had a huge dilemma whether I should choose economics or journalism for
the last three years and this program seems to be a perfect solution.
I find BA economics in the University of Chicago course rigorous and diverse and it is exactly what I am
looking for, as I want to work hard and gain skills in knowledge in a wide range of economic-related
modules, such as banking, finance and game theory. Also I am sure that in order to have a better
understanding of the economics you should live in a business atmosphere, in a city which is capital, Chicago can definitely be called one, being of one of the most important business centers in the world.

I set myself ambitious goals and do everything in order to achieve them. In future I see myself working
in a large international company, communicating with people, utilizing my knowledge of languages,
economics and mathematics gained in the University of Chicago. I look forward to stressing about
meeting deadlines and to fine-tuning financial models. I am absolutely certain that the University of
Chicago is a perfect choice for me as I can benefit tremendously from the flexibility of the given courses
and their uniqueness
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