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Dec 24, 2011
Undergraduate / Stanford roommate essay: 'asian, born in Brazil and lives in Canada' [4]

Dear future roommate,
I am thrilled to start a new part of our lives at Stanford, and I'm sure that you too are as excited. First of all, let me introduce myself. I am not your typical Asian. I was born in Brazil and lived there most of my life, but I recently moved to Canada. A bit weird eh?

Being from Brazil, I have always wanted to find out if what happened in the movies was real. Interestingly, some of my Canadian friends already became used to me asking, "I s it just like in those movies?" A funny moment like that was when I first saw a Yellow s chool bus, since I thought they didn't exist in real life, and freaked out about it. In university, I always imagined that line across the room, dividing the room into two very distinct spaces. I hope it never comes to that in our room.

I tend to learn things quickly, whether it is school related, or just fixing something on a computer. And if you ever require assistance, I assure you that I will always try to help you as best I can , even if that means dropping what I am currently working on.

Also, I have a great passion for sports; I can adapt to different sports quickly. I admit I don't have the best body build (I may be the skinniest person you ever know), yet I got on the rugby team. And even though I got wrecked in every rugby game, I love the thrill that the sport gives me.

Don't be worried if you expect a super messy room with clothes thrown all around and old food on the table. I tend to be clean and even have a habit of organizing everything. However, don't be alarmed if I start mumbling strange words in Portuguese from time to time or if I become overexcited because of a soccer game. Also if you were to become interested in learning a new language, I would gladly teach you. I look forward for these 4 years we will spend at Stanford

Regards, Kevin Lin

Your personality really shines through in this, just a few grammar mistakes here and there. But very good other than that!
tgf808   
Dec 24, 2011
Undergraduate / 'Tetris' - Stanford Roommate [3]

Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better.

feedback please!

To My Future Roomie:
Have you ever played Tetris? Each piece has a different shape, yet they can all fit together, just like a puzzle. Sometimes you might put a piece in the wrong spot, but by manipulating the other pieces, you can clear those mistakes.

Life is a game of Tetris and college is just one of the pieces I need to make that puzzle fit together. As you might be able to tell and you're surely going to find out later, I love playing Tetris. Aside from giving me the occasional brain stimulation I need, it takes me away from the stresses of life. I tend to be analytical and over-think things sometimes, but I am more than capable of taking whatever is thrown at me and using it strategically to better myself. No matter what piece I'm given in Tetris, I never give up and my persistence continues into the real world. My hard work and strive for excellence has always paid off.

I consider my family the "I" piece of Tetris. When the lines accumulate, the "I" piece can clear them with ease. Similarly, when I have problems that build up, I know my family will be there to erase them. If you ever watched Lilo and Stitch, you might have heard the phrase, "ʻOhana means family, and family means no one gets left behind." Being from Hawai'i, this rings true and I depend on the family I was born into as well as the additional family I have befriended over my years in high school to support me. I hope that with all the time we will spend together, you too will become a part of my ʻohana.

Aloha,
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