Undergraduate / Lehigh supplements; non-curable disease called "supply chain-itis" [3]

You literally copied my essay...

Fuck YOU!

Undergraduate / 'my parents are Danish' - essay [15]

Can you please write the prompts. I would be able to better comment on it. If I got to know what you are answering. Please write the prompts and I'll let you know, how is it.

Undergraduate / University of Illinois at Urbana - Champaign Essays; influences / about yourself [2]

I really love how essay 1 develops. I would advice you to go for it and submit it!

I can see that your English writing skills are excellent so there's no problem with that. However, on Essay 2, I would advice you to get rid of the "I could haves" and instead go for "I have done this and that." Also, if you can, go for a more personal experience or interest. I believe universities would like that more.

Best of luck!

Undergraduate / Brown; community's impact - My family has shaped me into an adventurous eater [2]

I would advice you to change the topic. You could still write an informal topic, maybe a Vietnamese tradition/origins/purpose but I think that being an adventurous eater is not exactly a topic that falls within the prompt. I understand that you can eat anything but universities usually look for what you'll bring to the university. So, if you stick to this topic, I'd advice you to shape the essay in a way which shows that you can cook or bring this food traditions to the university.

Best of luck!

If you can, please have a look at my essays.

P.S. you guys eat real weird stuff! :P