Undergraduate / 'interested in Psychology, Biology and Sociology' Why is Duke the right fit? [7]

WOW, I love DaeDae's comments. Yeah, you just don't sound so compelling; you tell too much; you need to SHOW them

Undergraduate / 'I will go with my stubbornness' - Upenn Intoduce Yourself [9]

Isn't this due already? It's very creative but it's also a challenge. It's likely that some people love your answer but some people don't

Essays / Yale supplement moment in history question [9]

I don't know if Yale will like it, but if that's what you want, do it.

Undergraduate / "Sadness"- Yale supplement [9]

I love this! If I were an admission officer I would admit you right away. The only thing is that I don't know if Yale will like your writing style. It's not very formal and I've seen many other students do this, too. So can you make your essay more in-depth and insightful? Like why do you want to expand your knowledge and all that? What's the purpose?